JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

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HOW'S MY DRIVING

Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs.

Comments

JAIME REYES

[azulescarabajo.livejournal.com]

As played by Milo. His HMD is here (http://azulescarabajo.livejournal.com/731.html).

Re: JAIME REYES

[eighttotwelve.livejournal.com]

I need to find an excuse to RP with Jaime.

Either if I need to app a fellow superhero, or just fling someone at him. Probably not Thane since Mordin's already his canonmate BUUUUUT. Yeah. C:

Mordin Solus

[modelscientist.livejournal.com]

As also played by Milo. His HMD is here (http://modelscientist.livejournal.com/280.html).

Re: Mordin Solus

[gorebite.livejournal.com]

Mordin has a very specific and recognizable cadence in his voice and mannerisms. He's also someone who is very firmly set in their beliefs. That you've managed to be consistent with this throughout the game is nothing short of amazing. BRAVO, MILO. Yours is the best Mordin. Of like. All time.

Red Snout

[raptorwithagun.livejournal.com]

As also, also played by Milo. His HMD is here (http://raptorwithagun.livejournal.com/1070.html).

Note: He's an OC. But crit is def. welcome on him of any sort.

Re: Red Snout

[moira-brown.livejournal.com]

GO COURT YOU A RED, KILL THINGS AND MAKE A NEST~

I mean, uh, he's a dinosaur with a gun; how exactly does that get more epic? Look forward to seeing more from him!

☆ T-800 ☆ Black-Two ☆ Zaeed Massani

[gorebite.livejournal.com]

As ruined forever by Odd.

Their HMDs are all in their journals. HTML is dicks right now.

hurp

[oneliners.livejournal.com]

You play a wonderful T-800 and a great Zaeed. Zaeed especially i really have grown fond of because of you, and i can hear his voice in like, every line you write.

Your Two is wonderful and I do like her characterization. Now that she's less crazypants she's doing well. I do... have two issues with her, though, and one i probably should have brought up sooner.

One and Two have barely interacted, and this is half my fault, and they're interacting again now. But now that they're interacting I find myself... I don't know how to tag or approach her. Because they barely spoke or interacted for months, I'm just... I have no idea. I know they're supposed to be super close and such but as it is, with their CR, I have a hard time imagining such a relationship between them in Singularity.

I don't know if you're expecting me to handwave months of stuff, and in that case, it's almost... unfair? I don't know what they might have talked about, what they might have done, how they might have interacted. On top of that, for a while there, Two was seriously undermining One. Two never went to One about... anything? Even when Two's mental state was a little fucked, she didn't talk to One about it or even talk to her about seeing a doctor and instead went directly to Carter. In a way, it made me feel like I should have One just feel and act like Two has stopped looking at her like her CO. :/

My other issue, and i'm gonna be the devil's advocate here, is her sleeping with Jorge. As an outsider and also a close canonmate, it felt... quick and almost random. I know you've explained that Two is unsure of her sexuality and wanted to experiment but the explanation still leaves me feeling a little less... satisfied? I don't feel like there was much -- or at least, enough -- build up to it. If you want to get down to it, I kind of doubt a sexually repressed woman like Two -- who apparently is a lesbian -- would have even been able to be turned on and get, ah, physically prepared enough to actually complete the act of full intercourse. There's also the fact that Two's close sister was beaten and mutilated by other Spartans for having a sexual relationship with a fellow Spartan in the past, and somehow this didn't affect her at all? Didn't make her nervous or hesitant in the slightest?

Aside from that, I love playing with you and would like to play with you more.

VIC'S LOT

[dimidiate.livejournal.com]

creepersphere
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dismembers
// (http://dismembers.livejournal.com/1058.html)

cohesions
// (http://cohesions.livejournal.com/997.html)

noblefive
// (http://noblefive.livejournal.com/882.html)

harpocratic
// (http://harpocratic.livejournal.com/773.html)

dimidiate
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HIT ME. Anon should be on for all journals, but if not just comment wherever or shoot me an email/im! I'm still working on activity issues with Legion, Grid, and the shadow and hoping to iron those out asap. Lmfdghghj input on what my characters are doing and what you'd like to see more/less of would be much appreciated! orz

[poisonousflame]

This is probably going to be the least constructive feedback ever, BUT:

I don't know anything about Nue's canon, but he's been so much fun to thread with. He's such a chill dude, and both his voice and attitude make me. So very interested in his canon, I can't even.

Sooo to attempt to make this at least slightly constructive. You've done an excellent job making a character that I had no idea even existed into someone extremely interesting that I'd love to know more about. His tags are always consistent in both quality and overall tone/voice, and. Yes. Just keep it up with everything ever.

AS I SAID, NOT VERY CONSTRUCTIVE. But hurr do enjoy threading with him/reading his interactions, and hope to do more. :|b

AXEL

[poisonousflame]

character name: Axel (played by Kasarin)
journal: poisonousflame
notes: My activity has been spotty this past month, for which I apologize. Between a new job and family health issues, I've been kinda all over the place.

Uuuh, I'd like to get him to open up a little more about himself, but. L-lol it takes a while for him to get comfortable enough to do so. x_X

Any notes on anything ever would be appreciated. ♥ Oh, and he's also got an HMD over here, if you'd prefer to use that.

Re: AXEL

[a_perfect_end]

I...don't know the fandom so well, so I can't with the concrit? Just. Come be active more! Everyone's pretty nice :D

Also, both my muses are totally jealous of. DAT. HAIR.

Kraks's unfortunates

[chttrbox-recon.livejournal.com]

chttrbox_recon
qcksilverspear
Anything and everythinf. HMDs on respective journals. Blah from phone with dying battery >.>

[manipul8trix.livejournal.com]

YOU. You are the sole reason I've asked my cousin if I can borrow his copy of Reach. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY. I DON'T EVEN LIKE FPS GAMES. SCREW YOU. >:I

... No okay ilu. While I can't really comment on how accurate your portrayal of Jun is BECAUSE I HAVE NO IDEA OBVIOUSLY DERPDERP, he's just. So much fun to thread with I don't even. You make my Happy Internet Pretendy Funtimes even more happy and... internet-pretendy-fun-ish?

UH YEAH YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN

YAY :D

[nobletwo.livejournal.com]

•Black-One | oneliners | Halo: Blood Lines
Notes: Yeah, I'm getting her out there more.
•Catherine-B320 / Noble Two | nobletwo | Halo: Reach
Notes: LOL HI NOBLE there are a few of you kat really needs to breathe on
•Annalee Call | feelslikereal | Alien: Resurrection
Notes: :|;;

[dimidiate.livejournal.com]

You know how I feel about your One, aka you write her amazingly and her voice is always very strong and clear. Only issue I'd like to bring up is that there have been periods where she's seemed very passive on the station, although I realize a large part of that is probably lack of her team/Noble shoving themselves everywhere/the station not exactly overflowing with things for her to really do. It was nice to see her being so assertive with Carter recently (lmao hi I was stalking that), and I guess what I'm saying is I'd like to see more of that?

Your Kat always makes me go fjkgjdfkjfghghhhhhhhngh in the best way. Her voice is strong and clear and consistent right up there with One's, but when I read them there's never any overlap between the two and just hnnngh never stop okay.

CALL IS CALL I really need to breathe all over her with my cast hurr. Grid should creep on her sometime for... some... reason... Actually like half my cast has a reason to talk to her ahah WE SHOULD MAKE SOMETHING HAPPEN Y/N/diaf vic

Davesprite

[featheryasshole]

Played by Aave.

Bluhh I feel I fail so much at having panfandom CR. Pretty much every time I've thrown him at other people I've ended up dropping the threads because the asshole just won't talk to people who don't type like tools. Or because of my nooby nervousness idk. I think I'm getting better at it, though? Maybe?

oh and edited to add a link to personal hmd because i am made of derps

[dimidiate.livejournal.com]

lmgfkdjg HI I

I have really enjoyed Davesprite's conversations with Nue. DS isn't a character I particularly joyed over much in the comic but I've been having a blast stalking yours and just hhghgjg yeah. Keysmash-levels of enjoyment.

A+ JOB, keep up the good work!

Terezi Pyrope

[circuitry]

Personal HMD with anonymous, screened commenting and no IP logging is here, if you're more comfortable posting there for any reason.

[manipul8trix.livejournal.com]

Yeah I still stand by that BEST TEREZI comment just fyi. :I

It's obvious that you really get her, if that makes sense? Terezi is (IMO) a really, really difficult character to get right, but yours is perfect. Her voice is always spot on and you don't overexaggerate her weird manic disposition like some Terezis do and and and agh <3

You are amazing. :3

[notsoloyal]

Transformers+Cape & Cowl Shockwave ▐ notsoloyal
Tron Evoluton Abraxas ▐ infectthegrid

[manipul8trix.livejournal.com]

Okay I know sod-all about Shockwave's canon outside your app but GODDAMN DO I LOVE HIM/YOU TO BITS

Even aside from him being Vriska's shiny new Scientist!Spacedad and everything, I just. Love reading his posts. Ahahah OH GOD ESPECIALLY WITH VIRGIL

FOR THE LOVE OF JEGUS, NEVER STOP INTERACTING WITH VIRGIL

EVER <3

Feferi Peixes

[cuttlefishcull.livejournal.com]

and Atlas he_shrugged

And I am so sorry for activity, it is something I will work on ._. Part is laziness, part is school starting again.

[heterochromiia.livejournal.com]

abloooooo i love you babycakes <3 best otp is best and now canon has basically said they're just like we play em ehehehehe

O'Brien | Arbiter | Eko | Marcus | NPC Twosix-six

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

why does Brig play all the characters

Private Blake "Spike" O'Brien | Halo Legends | sniperbitch | HMD link (http://sniperbitch.livejournal.com/820.html)

The Arbiter | Halo 3 | arbitrating | HMD link (http://arbitrating.livejournal.com/1515.html)

Eko Hoshunin | KARAS | temerate | HMD link (http://temerate.livejournal.com/5818.html)

Marcus Wright | Terminator: Salvation | equalsdeath | HMD link (http://equalsdeath.livejournal.com/1031.html)

Twosix-six aka "Tiberius" | original Singularity NPC | bastione | HMD link (http://bastione.livejournal.com/1057.html)

[dimidiate.livejournal.com]

lmdfskjg

hi I

really like playing off your Eko

He reads like you've put the work into sorting out his background which, for a character who was kind of flat at times in the series adds a sense of really nice depth and um. Yeah. YOU MAKE A SPARKLEFAG BADGUY INTO A REALLY INTERESTING DUDE and hurr hi I'm really happy you brought him in here because he makes Nue freak in the best ways.

BRING HIM OUT MORE.

YORK

[howkickassiam.livejournal.com]

Played by Chii, and he has an anon enabled HMD up in his LJ too.

This is totes IC idec

[terminatenomore.livejournal.com]

I heard York bought fifty dicks off of ebay and sucked them all.

CARTER

[nobleleader.livejournal.com]

OH GOD OKAY THIS GUY. oh yeah also played by me/chii

If you have crit, I am more than willing to hear it.

Shit I know I wanna/need to work on:

* Not being too casual. he's not the same level as Kat with like, being all ~professional, in that he calls people by name, says "okay" and "alright" but god help me if you catch me saying shit like "yes" or whatever, FEEL FREE to correct me okay. Also just. fkslas yeah.
* I-interactions with Spartans how I do?
* Interacting with non Spartans laksfj. (UNSURE....)
* idk existing .-.

OH YEAH EDITED:

* ALSO I. Worry about stepping on toes with Carter. with civvies and with Spartans like with the whole DRESS LIKE CIVVIES GAIZ!! thing. Please please tell me if something isn't okay, I am more than willing to work on stuff. skafsfjk /WORRIES FOREVER

Re: CARTER

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

B| who said you could play haloz

Sarah Connor & Parker

[hows-the-knee.livejournal.com]

Both have anon-enabled, screened HMDs:

Sarah (http://hows-the-knee.livejournal.com/528.html)

Parker (http://theniputitback.livejournal.com/1006.html)

Crit is welcome, either here or there :)

Re: Sarah Connor & Parker

[terminatenomore.livejournal.com]

YOUR SARAH IS GOD TIER. She tells it likes it is and afraids of nothing. I like how you don't have her as this military genius godmode sue. She makes mistakes, she learns from them and ultimately comes out the better character for it. Her interactions with anyone, particularly York and her castmates are amaze. I stalk her. I stalk her hard.

I also really want her to make out with York in front of the whole goddamn station IGNORE ME

[eternalritual.livejournal.com]

Khalil here with her two inactive oddballs:

- Veetor'Nara nar Rayya (Mass Effect 2)
- Mayu Amakura (Fatal Frame II)

[dimidiate.livejournal.com]

YOU KNOW MY FEELS ABOUT VEETOR he and Legion should do something more y/n/gtfo vic

And Mayu is adorable and fjgdfkjg I owe her a tag I'm going to harass you for more interactions with her ok.

John Connor

[robots-omgh8u.livejournal.com]

HMD is here (http://robots-omgh8u.livejournal.com/521.html).

So yeah he's just shown up, but I'd still be happy to hear whatever crit any of you might have for me.

Re: John Connor

[terminatenomore.livejournal.com]

HNNNG HNNNNG HNNNNG HNNNNNG I can't even words right now, bro.

He's so new and yet so perfecto. YOU KNOW MY FEELINGS ON JOHN. I could only love him more if he starts yelling at everyone for ruining his lighting.

Vriska Serket

[manipul8trix.livejournal.com]

HMD with anon/screening on, IP logging off bluh bluh etc (http://manipul8trix.livejournal.com/624.html)

Brb flailing forever

Re: Vriska Serket

[terminatenomore.livejournal.com]

This character. This character right here is why I'm looking at my calender, considering faking my death for a few weeks and getting into Homestuck.

I love her, never change.

TEAL

[idkmybffhanna.livejournal.com]

idkmybffhanna

puppetfetishist

machine_god


I know, I know, I'm very slow to tag :( And tend to thread-drop by accident x_X;

[cuttlefishcull.livejournal.com]

You made me read HINABN because Zombie is just so endearing. After reading it now I can say he's spot on as well, and adorable in the most deadpan way. I want a hanna soooo bad just so I can stalk them :<

and Bro dfhd I really am impressed how people can take characters like that and give them so much detail and personality. You really took him and kept all the whimsy we get in the comic, plus some actual depth we never get to enjoy.

and of course oocly you're awesome. So that's my crit, keep up the amazing work :]

ALBA

[allshock-notalk.livejournal.com]

Soundwave | Transformers [cape&cowl au] | allshock_notalk
Thane Krios | Mass Effect [canon] | eighttotwelve

Notations: Just my activity in general sucks, but I will be trying to tag y'all.

Re: ALBA

[idkmybffhanna.livejournal.com]

*CHEWS ON SOUNDWAVE*

*JUST*

*CHEWs ON HIM?*

That said, I know he's been through a metric shitton thanks to CnC, but I'd still like to see less of the whiny boyfriend and more of the conniving asshole, if that makes sense...? I mean his relationship with Shockwave is all well and good, but I want moar scheming, even if it's not so much evil scheming as morally ambiguous scheming...?

if that. makes any sense deerrrrppp

Also, I wanted to ask: is Soundwave DJing Spaceprom...? or was that just a rumor

[ysonightfurious.livejournal.com]

ysonightfurious | How to Train Your Dragon | HMD (http://ysonightfurious.livejournal.com/640.html)
mcfussyfangs | MS Paint Adventures: Homestuck | HMD (http://mcfussyfangs.livejournal.com/1130.html)
has_a_hardline | Red vs Blue (AU) | HMD (http://has-a-hardline.livejournal.com/1293.html)
im_sorry_dave | 2001: A Space Odyssey | HMD (http://im-sorry-dave.livejournal.com/898.html)

Notes:
* New MSPA update means that I am slowly revamping what I need to do to Kanaya. FFFFFFFFUUUUUUU-
* I'd especially appreciate some crit on Toothless.

[manipul8trix.livejournal.com]

Ohmigodohmigod /loves on

Seriously your Kanaya makes me SO HAPPY. The awkward. The prickliness. The fussing meddling helpfulness. The prompting of overdramatic ragequits. HELL YES. I especially love the way you get her Kanaya-esque inner warmth across even when she's being all cagey with Vriska and and and yeah <3

And "It would please me greatly to invite you to a metaphorical gathering, deflower-er of mothers" is still THE GREATEST THING EVER WRITTEN, EVER.

Jeff

[mymothersshadow.livejournal.com]

mymothersshadow | Cortana | Halo
HMD: Here. (http://mymothersshadow.livejournal.com/970.html)

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

CORTANA IS AMAZING OKAY NEVER CHANGE

I'm so happy we finally have a chance to play off one, they seem to be few and far between on the interwebs. Her tone of voice is always really IC to me and I hear her dialogue in Cortana's voice.

[suckitimashark.livejournal.com]

Virgil, an oc by Mouse. HMD is here (http://suckitimashark.livejournal.com/798.html)

I'd like to just... apologize again. lol.

[manipul8trix.livejournal.com]

O-oh man yes. Virgil posts are some of my favourites. :D His hideousness is so unbelievably massive that it... kind of turns back in on itself and transmogrifies into purest awesome.

(A hideous kind of awesome)

(BUT STILL AWESOME, IT TOTALLY COUNTS :D)

Delta & Emile-A239

[starlit-dragon.livejournal.com]

Both have aon HMDs on their own journals, if you would rather. A little about each:

alaspooryork = Delta: A little AI who's been here since the game opened. I know he's pretty quiet most of the time - he prefers to leave human interaction up to York, since he doesn't really think he's very good at it. Am I doing okay with this? SHould I have him at more people? Let me know!

evaskullface = Emile-A239 aka Noble Four: Is probably the entire reason the station thinks all Spartans are racist (speciesist?) assholes. Keeping him largely off the network is at this point less of a suggestion and more of a soft order. Emile out of a combat situation is very fish-out-of-water, and I hope I'm expressing his general unease in being here without going too far - or not far enough. Feedback welcome.

Re: Delta & Emile-A239

[poisonousflame]

Delta is pretty much the most adorable thing ever. Which was my exact reaction to him in canon, so. :|b Despite what little canon he has, he's a very fun, interesting character, and I've really enjoyed threading with him. You're playing him wonderfully. ♥

(I also find it kind of hilarious that he's the one Axel's opened up to the most here, with the exception of Roxas. GOOD JOB, LITTLE GREEN HOLOGRAM.)