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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING
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VIC'S LOT
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I don't know anything about Nue's canon, but he's been so much fun to thread with. He's such a chill dude, and both his voice and attitude make me. So very interested in his canon, I can't even.
Sooo to attempt to make this at least slightly constructive. You've done an excellent job making a character that I had no idea even existed into someone extremely interesting that I'd love to know more about. His tags are always consistent in both quality and overall tone/voice, and. Yes. Just keep it up with everything ever.
AS I SAID, NOT VERY CONSTRUCTIVE. But hurr do enjoy threading with him/reading his interactions, and hope to do more. :|b
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Aand I might as well say this here so this reply isn't ridiculously short; I'm speaking with next to no experience with KH beyond what I know through other rpers, but I've had a lot of fun tagging with your Axel. He's been really interesting to bounce Nue off, and in a way being p much canon blind has made it more enjoyable. If. That makes any sense. ANYWAYS he's been superbly fun to read and play with and I look forward to seeing him around more! o/
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Ahh, thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying him! And don't worry, you'll definitely be seeing more of him around. :D
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Grid is fantastic but I'd like to see her around more? The Spartans dropped the ball with doing something about her and they... should probably pick it up. Call doesn't really know she's on the station yet (unless i handwave her finding old network shit) so... lol.
MORE LEGION 8(
Your Jorge is fantastic and I love seeing him around and such. My single issue with him is the same one I brought up to Odd. The sleeping with Two seemed really rushed and random and kind of awkward and... idk. OOC? atm. I, personally, can't visualize Jorge sleeping with another Spartan-II ever. IDC if in Blood Line, there was some Spartan incest going on. Part of the point of that was that it was abnormal among Spartans and a Really Bad Thing. I can't visualize Jorge seeing another Spartan-II as anything more than a brother or sister and so it seems... weird that he'd do something so obviously creepy.
More shadow. :c I feel like he's one of those chars you can throw around everywhere since he's like a retarded puppy.
NUE IS... NUE. i admit i haven't looked at much of his stuff.
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Grid I def' need to drag out more and... plot some stuff. Need to get her screaming at more newcomers and throwing her facehuggers at people and just generally being a bigger threat since lmfdkgjfg idefk how Grid has not been killed once yet. ALSO I'd love it if Call knew she was around so kfmdkgfgh /PLOTS A NETWORK POST
LEGION NEEDS TO COME BACK OUT and talk to people more and wtf at this doubleshep weirdness hurr /kicks muse in the optic
Y-yeah that's something I wish I'd put more thought into before going ahead with, but here goes justification anyways! The issue with the S-II is really valid, though, and had Two been on any other team he def' would have been far less inclined to ever sleep with her but Black team seems so disconnected from the rest of the Spartans as a whole (due to their black ops nature = totally off his radar for... idefk, like two decades?) she's a lot more brosis and a lot less TWO MY SISTER than a spartan he would have had more contact with over the years. But yeah, the Two thing was rushed, particularly since that log remains unfinished and none of the build up or the justifications we'd tossed around came through on that. I'm going to be talking to Odd more on this, but the entire thing was, from an IC point, really, really awkward for the both of them and one of those 'okay that's done let's... not... do that again...' and sort of end up swept under their respective carpets as much as possible. Buuut if it's a huge issue, given the state of the log as unfinished, I can talk it over with Odd and we could potentially retcon the whole thing?
The shadow needs to bug more people yyy--ideally retarded-puppy-followin'-you-home-and-pissin'-on-the-rug style.
WATCH KARAS YOU SLUT it's like Japanese Batman
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Also I still love Shadow too <3 I haven't had good rp experiences with oc's but he is so clever and adorable!
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Also, moar Shadow plskthx.
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Is that crit enough? 8D;;;
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Because we should totes do All The Things.