JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

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HOW'S MY DRIVING

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[blacktwo.livejournal.com]

And about One having been assaulted in the past. Even when it happened, Two was not practically hung up over it after she and the rest of Black Team beat Red Team shitless for it. Two loves One, and I was under the impression that (from Two’s prospective anyway), Black Team had its closure when they took vengeance on Red Team and were in lockdown together. There’s also the fact that happened when they were fairly young and there’s been time to heal emotional. Two does not come off as someone to hold a grudge for very long or someone incapable of disassociating Red Team and other Spartans.

So, yes. Two needs a serious overhaul and I owe you as a fellow player and someone who has a lot of canonical CR with her to really make the effort here. But I feel that what I’ve done so far can be expedited if we improve our communication.

[oneliners.livejournal.com]

Half of that is my fault, since i've been feeling this way since Two started undermining One, and I haven't really been able to reconnect it all. I mean like... when Two went to Carter and all that, I remember not even getting so much of an IM or something about it and was really upset over it. However, it was already done by the time I woke up and found out, so I felt like i couldn't be like OH HEY ODD WHAT THE HELL?? Aside from Ghost Bros and clothes shopping, honestly I always felt like you'd rather have her interact with... idk other people. The clothes thing was kind of a disaster anyway; I was busy and drunk and going to bed, and by the time i got up -- i was on vacation at the time -- it had already progressed to a point One had been written out. And again, I should have said something then instead of now.
I owe tags because i honestly don't know how to approach Two? I mean like, i didn't know if I should act like they just hadn't been talking or interacting at all besides those two/three instances.

I think, honestly, we have different interpretations of the incident that happened between Black Team. I felt like Blood Line's plot was half to show this team was still riddled with issues that should have been healed by that time, Two included. And aside from that, growing up in an atmosphere where sexual and romantic relationships between S-IIs is strictly prohibited does have an affect on a person. For example, Two's lack of involvement with that might have been from the fact she agreed to and adhered to those rules and regulations. I mean, from that angle there's a slew of delicious inner conflict that a character can go through growth-wise. Interest in sexual and romantic activity -- no matter which gender -- conflicting with moral code. I mean, for example, you can follow up on it. Now that it's done, how does Two feel? Is she ashamed about it? What are her thoughts on the rule being in place? How do the family-like bonds between S-IIs make her feel about the experience, etc?

hurr improved communication would be A++