http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-01-22 04:36 pm
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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

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featheryasshole: (oh the tragedy)

Davesprite

[personal profile] featheryasshole 2011-01-22 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Played by Aave.

Bluhh I feel I fail so much at having panfandom CR. Pretty much every time I've thrown him at other people I've ended up dropping the threads because the asshole just won't talk to people who don't type like tools. Or because of my nooby nervousness idk. I think I'm getting better at it, though? Maybe?

oh and edited to add a link to personal hmd because i am made of derps
Edited 2011-01-22 21:55 (UTC)

[identity profile] dimidiate.livejournal.com 2011-01-22 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
lmgfkdjg HI I

I have really enjoyed Davesprite's conversations with Nue. DS isn't a character I particularly joyed over much in the comic but I've been having a blast stalking yours and just hhghgjg yeah. Keysmash-levels of enjoyment.

A+ JOB, keep up the good work!
featheryasshole: (its not all bad)

[personal profile] featheryasshole 2011-01-23 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
afdgfdh THANK YOU <3

I seriously feel so unsure about him ALL THE TIME but apparently I'm still managing to do it rite? Just. I feel so surprised and grateful every time someone says I'm doing a good job and afgafgfha just thank you :')

[identity profile] manipul8trix.livejournal.com 2011-01-22 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
You already know ilu, bb. But that's not going to stop me gushing at you some more.
Publically. With flailing and random keysmashes in place of words.
DEAL WITH IT 8)

I CAN'T HELP IT, OKAY. Your Davesprite is just. Amazing. It'd be so easy to make him a one-dimensional "SRS DAVE" or "DAVE PLUS WINGS" or something but you don't. DUDE HAS LAYERS. You do really well at bringing out that broken-ness in him without making him into a pathetic woobie and dalkjsal;kj YEAH I GOT NO MORE WORDS

JUST

YES

/lovingly stabs you in the neck <3
featheryasshole: (what is this i dont even)

[personal profile] featheryasshole 2011-01-22 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
asdafdaa;SADA

my davesprite would be nothing without your vriska ok

now make your own thread so i can go there to gush about you


/ooh bb you can murder me any time <3-
circuitry: (Default)

[personal profile] circuitry 2011-01-22 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I WANT TO LICK YOUR DELICIOUS ORANGE CREAMSICLE DAVE ALL OVER

okay no seriously I love Davesprite. I love how he's still recognizably the Dave we see in canon, but there's all this awful PTSD and other stuff that makes him different. You've put a lot of thought into how Terezi-induced BAD END changed him. One of my favorite things is when people take a character that gets very little screentime and fleshes them out and basically does wonderful things with them, and this is exactly what you've accomplished here.

♥ ♥ ♥
featheryasshole: (gtfo terezi)

[personal profile] featheryasshole 2011-01-23 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
spoilers: about 85% of my Davesprite characterization comes from fanfic

but still thank you ♥

also the icon keywords are a lie. feel free to lick forever, terezi
circuitry: (L11111CK)

[personal profile] circuitry 2011-01-23 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
But you are still doing wonderful things with him, whether it's your own headcanon and characterization or not. ♥

ps icon relevant

Re: Davesprite

[identity profile] cuttlefishcull.livejournal.com 2011-01-23 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
Ugh Aave, your Davesprite. He makes me baw and he is just so amazing. He's Dave but he's his own character, which is amazing and just makes him like... it's like he has his own place in the canon to me now, rather than just 'Future Dave.' He is Davesprite orange creamsicle, it is him.

Just. keep doing an awesome job man :|b What else can I even say, awesome pretty much covers it
featheryasshole: (oh the tragedy)

[personal profile] featheryasshole 2011-01-23 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
i-i am running out of ways to say thank you in a slightly confused tone what is this

just

THANK YOU it is so amazingly awesome to hear that i am actually doin somethin rite here

/crying a billion tears of joy
a_perfect_end: The players tried for a forward pass. (Default)

Re: Davesprite

[personal profile] a_perfect_end 2011-01-23 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
Honestly, I started stalking your threads purely for the username (it made me lol because I am secretly a third-grader), and have stayed for the amazing interactions? So. :D

I do not know Homestuck all that well, so I'm not the best to ask for that stuff. But everything you've written has been entertaining and interesting to read!
featheryasshole: (its not all bad)

[personal profile] featheryasshole 2011-01-23 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
i
um
THANK YOU

/hiding in a corner blushing because what is this thing where people say i'm writing well i do not get it