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singularityooc2011-01-22 04:36 pm
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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING
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Davesprite
Bluhh I feel I fail so much at having panfandom CR. Pretty much every time I've thrown him at other people I've ended up dropping the threads because the asshole just won't talk to people who don't type like tools. Or because of my nooby nervousness idk. I think I'm getting better at it, though? Maybe?
oh and edited to add a link to personal hmd because i am made of derps
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I have really enjoyed Davesprite's conversations with Nue. DS isn't a character I particularly joyed over much in the comic but I've been having a blast stalking yours and just hhghgjg yeah. Keysmash-levels of enjoyment.
A+ JOB, keep up the good work!
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I seriously feel so unsure about him ALL THE TIME but apparently I'm still managing to do it rite? Just. I feel so surprised and grateful every time someone says I'm doing a good job and afgafgfha just thank you :')
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Publically. With flailing and random keysmashes in place of words.
DEAL WITH IT 8)
I CAN'T HELP IT, OKAY. Your Davesprite is just. Amazing. It'd be so easy to make him a one-dimensional "SRS DAVE" or "DAVE PLUS WINGS" or something but you don't. DUDE HAS LAYERS. You do really well at bringing out that broken-ness in him without making him into a pathetic woobie and dalkjsal;kj YEAH I GOT NO MORE WORDS
JUST
YES
/lovingly stabs you in the neck <3
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my davesprite would be nothing without your vriska ok
now make your own thread so i can go there to gush about you
/ooh bb you can murder me any time <3-
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okay no seriously I love Davesprite. I love how he's still recognizably the Dave we see in canon, but there's all this awful PTSD and other stuff that makes him different. You've put a lot of thought into how Terezi-induced BAD END changed him. One of my favorite things is when people take a character that gets very little screentime and fleshes them out and basically does wonderful things with them, and this is exactly what you've accomplished here.
♥ ♥ ♥
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but still thank you ♥
also the icon keywords are a lie. feel free to lick forever, terezi
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ps icon relevant
Re: Davesprite
Just. keep doing an awesome job man :|b What else can I even say, awesome pretty much covers it
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just
THANK YOU it is so amazingly awesome to hear that i am actually doin somethin rite here
/crying a billion tears of joy
Re: Davesprite
I do not know Homestuck all that well, so I'm not the best to ask for that stuff. But everything you've written has been entertaining and interesting to read!
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um
THANK YOU
/hiding in a corner blushing because what is this thing where people say i'm writing well i do not get it