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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING

Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs.

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As played by Milo. His HMD is here (http://azulescarabajo.livejournal.com/731.html).

As also played by Milo. His HMD is here (http://modelscientist.livejournal.com/280.html).

As also, also played by Milo. His HMD is here (http://raptorwithagun.livejournal.com/1070.html).

Note: He's an OC. But crit is def. welcome on him of any sort.

As ruined forever by Odd.

Their HMDs are all in their journals. HTML is dicks right now.

creepersphere
// (http://creepersphere.livejournal.com/1316.html)

dismembers
// (http://dismembers.livejournal.com/1058.html)

cohesions
// (http://cohesions.livejournal.com/997.html)

noblefive
// (http://noblefive.livejournal.com/882.html)

harpocratic
// (http://harpocratic.livejournal.com/773.html)

dimidiate
// (http://dimidiate.livejournal.com/1010.html)

HIT ME. Anon should be on for all journals, but if not just comment wherever or shoot me an email/im! I'm still working on activity issues with Legion, Grid, and the shadow and hoping to iron those out asap. Lmfdghghj input on what my characters are doing and what you'd like to see more/less of would be much appreciated! orz

Mordin has a very specific and recognizable cadence in his voice and mannerisms. He's also someone who is very firmly set in their beliefs. That you've managed to be consistent with this throughout the game is nothing short of amazing. BRAVO, MILO. Yours is the best Mordin. Of like. All time.

character name: Axel (played by Kasarin)
journal:

poisonousflame
notes: My activity has been spotty this past month, for which I apologize. Between a new job and family health issues, I've been kinda all over the place.

Uuuh, I'd like to get him to open up a little more about himself, but. L-lol it takes a while for him to get comfortable enough to do so. x_X

Any notes on anything ever would be appreciated. ♥ Oh, and he's also got an HMD over here, if you'd prefer to use that.

chttrbox_recon

qcksilverspear
Anything and everythinf. HMDs on respective journals. Blah from phone with dying battery >.>

•Black-One |

oneliners | Halo: Blood Lines
Notes: Yeah, I'm getting her out there more.
•Catherine-B320 / Noble Two |

nobletwo | Halo: Reach
Notes: LOL HI NOBLE there are a few of you kat really needs to breathe on
•Annalee Call |

feelslikereal | Alien: Resurrection
Notes: :|;;

Played by Aave.

Bluhh I feel I fail so much at having panfandom CR. Pretty much every time I've thrown him at other people I've ended up dropping the threads because the asshole just won't talk to people who don't type like tools. Or because of my nooby nervousness idk. I think I'm getting better at it, though? Maybe?

oh and edited to add a link to personal hmd because i am made of derps

Edited 2011-01-22 21:55 (UTC)

Personal HMD with anonymous, screened commenting and no IP logging is here, if you're more comfortable posting there for any reason.

Transformers+Cape & Cowl Shockwave ▐

notsoloyal
Tron Evoluton Abraxas ▐

infectthegrid

and Atlas

he_shrugged

And I am so sorry for activity, it is something I will work on ._. Part is laziness, part is school starting again.

why does Brig play all the characters

Private Blake "Spike" O'Brien | Halo Legends |

sniperbitch | HMD link (http://sniperbitch.livejournal.com/820.html)

The Arbiter | Halo 3 |

arbitrating | HMD link (http://arbitrating.livejournal.com/1515.html)

Eko Hoshunin | KARAS |

temerate | HMD link (http://temerate.livejournal.com/5818.html)

Marcus Wright | Terminator: Salvation |

equalsdeath | HMD link (http://equalsdeath.livejournal.com/1031.html)

Twosix-six aka "Tiberius" | original Singularity NPC |

bastione | HMD link (http://bastione.livejournal.com/1057.html)

Edited 2011-01-22 22:05 (UTC)

lmdfskjg

hi I

really like playing off your Eko

He reads like you've put the work into sorting out his background which, for a character who was kind of flat at times in the series adds a sense of really nice depth and um. Yeah. YOU MAKE A SPARKLEFAG BADGUY INTO A REALLY INTERESTING DUDE and hurr hi I'm really happy you brought him in here because he makes Nue freak in the best ways.

BRING HIM OUT MORE.

abloooooo i love you babycakes <3 best otp is best and now canon has basically said they're just like we play em ehehehehe

You play a wonderful T-800 and a great Zaeed. Zaeed especially i really have grown fond of because of you, and i can hear his voice in like, every line you write.

Your Two is wonderful and I do like her characterization. Now that she's less crazypants she's doing well. I do... have two issues with her, though, and one i probably should have brought up sooner.

One and Two have barely interacted, and this is half my fault, and they're interacting again now. But now that they're interacting I find myself... I don't know how to tag or approach her. Because they barely spoke or interacted for months, I'm just... I have no idea. I know they're supposed to be super close and such but as it is, with their CR, I have a hard time imagining such a relationship between them in Singularity.

I don't know if you're expecting me to handwave months of stuff, and in that case, it's almost... unfair? I don't know what they might have talked about, what they might have done, how they might have interacted. On top of that, for a while there, Two was seriously undermining One. Two never went to One about... anything? Even when Two's mental state was a little fucked, she didn't talk to One about it or even talk to her about seeing a doctor and instead went directly to Carter. In a way, it made me feel like I should have One just feel and act like Two has stopped looking at her like her CO. :/

My other issue, and i'm gonna be the devil's advocate here, is her sleeping with Jorge. As an outsider and also a close canonmate, it felt... quick and almost random. I know you've explained that Two is unsure of her sexuality and wanted to experiment but the explanation still leaves me feeling a little less... satisfied? I don't feel like there was much -- or at least, enough -- build up to it. If you want to get down to it, I kind of doubt a sexually repressed woman like Two -- who apparently is a lesbian -- would have even been able to be turned on and get, ah, physically prepared enough to actually complete the act of full intercourse. There's also the fact that Two's close sister was beaten and mutilated by other Spartans for having a sexual relationship with a fellow Spartan in the past, and somehow this didn't affect her at all? Didn't make her nervous or hesitant in the slightest?

Aside from that, I love playing with you and would like to play with you more.

This is probably going to be the least constructive feedback ever, BUT:

I don't know anything about Nue's canon, but he's been so much fun to thread with. He's such a chill dude, and both his voice and attitude make me. So very interested in his canon, I can't even.

Sooo to attempt to make this at least slightly constructive. You've done an excellent job making a character that I had no idea even existed into someone extremely interesting that I'd love to know more about. His tags are always consistent in both quality and overall tone/voice, and. Yes. Just keep it up with everything ever.

AS I SAID, NOT VERY CONSTRUCTIVE. But hurr do enjoy threading with him/reading his interactions, and hope to do more. :|b

Played by Chii, and he has an anon enabled HMD up in his LJ too.

OH GOD OKAY THIS GUY. oh yeah also played by me/chii

If you have crit, I am more than willing to hear it.

Shit I know I wanna/need to work on:

* Not being too casual. he's not the same level as Kat with like, being all ~professional, in that he calls people by name, says "okay" and "alright" but god help me if you catch me saying shit like "yes" or whatever, FEEL FREE to correct me okay. Also just. fkslas yeah.
* I-interactions with Spartans how I do?
* Interacting with non Spartans laksfj. (UNSURE....)
* idk existing .-.

OH YEAH EDITED:

* ALSO I. Worry about stepping on toes with Carter. with civvies and with Spartans like with the whole DRESS LIKE CIVVIES GAIZ!! thing. Please please tell me if something isn't okay, I am more than willing to work on stuff. skafsfjk /WORRIES FOREVER

Edited 2011-01-22 22:37 (UTC)

PRISM IS SPOT-ON and I'm greatly anticipating plotstuff with him in the future.

Grid is fantastic but I'd like to see her around more? The Spartans dropped the ball with doing something about her and they... should probably pick it up. Call doesn't really know she's on the station yet (unless i handwave her finding old network shit) so... lol.

MORE LEGION 8(

Your Jorge is fantastic and I love seeing him around and such. My single issue with him is the same one I brought up to Odd. The sleeping with Two seemed really rushed and random and kind of awkward and... idk. OOC? atm. I, personally, can't visualize Jorge sleeping with another Spartan-II ever. IDC if in Blood Line, there was some Spartan incest going on. Part of the point of that was that it was abnormal among Spartans and a Really Bad Thing. I can't visualize Jorge seeing another Spartan-II as anything more than a brother or sister and so it seems... weird that he'd do something so obviously creepy.

More shadow. :c I feel like he's one of those chars you can throw around everywhere since he's like a retarded puppy.

NUE IS... NUE. i admit i haven't looked at much of his stuff.

THAT ICON IS SO CUTE ;A;

Both have anon-enabled, screened HMDs:

Sarah (http://hows-the-knee.livejournal.com/528.html)

Parker (http://theniputitback.livejournal.com/1006.html)

Crit is welcome, either here or there :)

You know how I feel about your One, aka you write her amazingly and her voice is always very strong and clear. Only issue I'd like to bring up is that there have been periods where she's seemed very passive on the station, although I realize a large part of that is probably lack of her team/Noble shoving themselves everywhere/the station not exactly overflowing with things for her to really do. It was nice to see her being so assertive with Carter recently (lmao hi I was stalking that), and I guess what I'm saying is I'd like to see more of that?

Your Kat always makes me go fjkgjdfkjfghghhhhhhhngh in the best way. Her voice is strong and clear and consistent right up there with One's, but when I read them there's never any overlap between the two and just hnnngh never stop okay.

CALL IS CALL I really need to breathe all over her with my cast hurr. Grid should creep on her sometime for... some... reason... Actually like half my cast has a reason to talk to her ahah WE SHOULD MAKE SOMETHING HAPPEN Y/N/diaf vic

MY ME TIME IS SHORTLIVED and I only played parts and pieces of the game and mostly just watched Alba play the whole thing, but you are such a lovely Mordin, hngshfhs. /smashes against him.

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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

JAIME REYES

Mordin Solus

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☆ T-800 ☆ Black-Two ☆ Zaeed Massani

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O'Brien | Arbiter | Eko | Marcus | NPC Twosix-six

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Sarah Connor & Parker

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