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singularityooc2011-01-22 04:36 pm
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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING
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Re: CARTER
I love your carter obv and i want to rape his face.
As for crit, sometimes you do make his speech mannerisms really casual. I catch him taking on York's speech patterns on occasion, which makes me head tilt a little since Carter has a very refined and eloquent way of speaking, even if he's not super formal like Kat is.
Sometimes I think you make him stand down too much, actually. I don't mean he should be a control freak and there are some chars -- like One -- who would just give him the finger, but i see him tip-toeing around say, Emile and such, like "oh no! what if i piss him off 8("
I mean, it shouldn't matter if he pisses them off or not since he's Carter, King of the Spartans. In game we see him being very professional and rough with his orders, angry if they're not followed on time or correctly. We haven't seen Carter really yell at anyone in Sing like he does to say, Six in game.
Re: CARTER
and sob yeah the Emile thing was difficult. It wasn't so much of a "what if I piss him off" because that doesn't concern him, it's more of a matter of like. fslkaj Emile's kind of a special snowflake. even when they were in that tower or whatever and everyone but Six had helmets, Emile kept his on, doesn't ever take that off. I kind of think Emile'd stick to that all the time unless it was like. BIG HUGE ORDERS like here dress nice, we're gonna go to this that or the other. So on a huge space station where Emile's not exactly popular, and he and Carter have already kind of clashed heads about something, Carter's not gonna let him get away with not obeying, but I wasn't sure whether he'd flat out ORDER it or if he'd just be like :\ this is how it is Emile. Emile wasn't getting out of it either way, but yeah lfkmalkfms. def wasn't sure how to handle it.
SAME WITH ONE, SOB. /face in hands.
And yeah, but I don't know if he's really had reason to yell at anyone? Emile, maybe, AND LMAO I MEAN HE'S HAD REASON TO YELL AT KAT but it's Kat I think yelling at her would make her be like 8) i'm sorry i didn't hear you..... 8) 8) 8)
ngshflkjs I will def try to get him to be more leadery, at the very least >C!!!
HURGHGHSFJ.