JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

[singularitymods.livejournal.com]

HOW'S MY DRIVING

Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs.

Comments

[i-would-kindly.livejournal.com]

Jack; Bioshock

HMD is here (http://i-would-kindly.livejournal.com/1149.html)

Crit is greatly appreciated. I'm still shaky with his voice. Lemme know how I'm doin, yeah?

[dimidiate.livejournal.com]

I fap to your Jack.

No seriously you play him so well I hnnnnngh. His thought processes are so weird because of his home environment and conditioning and all that and you bring it out in him so well it's like oh god are you a wizard??? Threading with and stalking him is so much fun I just gjfdgksjfdghjfg.

good mouse best jack

[a_perfect_end]

What I really like here is that you've taken what's basically the...mostly-empty, Default Male Protagonist, adventuretiems-delivery-device and made him into much more of a character. I am curious about how he's gonna deal with running out of junk EVE and whether he's asked 7 to the Enchantment Under the Sea Dance yet omg.

Also the sweater icon slays me with adorable. I am slain.

[oneliners.livejournal.com]

i love jack /no constructiveness


he will get a bear hat

[i_like_your]

Kittens!!! The T-X.

But if you want to do the journal-specific thing, the link is in the profile.

[a_perfect_end]

SO TERRIFYING.

NEVER STOP. BEING SCARY. AAAAAAAaaaa~

...T-that is all, really.

[heterochromiia.livejournal.com]

HI I'M SORRY I AM NEVER HERE also i play this asshole.

[mcfussyfangs.livejournal.com]

BE AROUND MORE!

But aside from that? We coo'

[itsdecaf.livejournal.com]

BLU Sniper
itsdecaf
HMD Post (http://itsdecaf.livejournal.com/616.html) Anon should be on.

inb4 "Wait, you're still here?"

Cindy Meltzer

[thiswaydaddy.livejournal.com]

As played by Hiku, HMD. (http://thiswaydaddy.livejournal.com/1092.html)

Commander Shepard, Renegade.

[cmdr-renegade.livejournal.com]

As played by Hiku, HMD (http://cmdr-renegade.livejournal.com/932.html).

[timeturntable.livejournal.com]

I hear Jennifer Hale in everything. You. Post. Also, she's so awesome and active and sdfdsfkeysmash.

/you're one of the few people i stalked before apping in here even ngl

Kaylee Frye

[cupcake-dress.livejournal.com]

As played by Hiku, HMD (http://cupcake-dress.livejournal.com/1203.html).

Re: Kaylee Frye

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

Kaylee is the most adorable ever. I want to pick her up and hug her every time she says anything.

CLU and Moira Brown

[a_perfect_end]

CLU:

• Evil perfectionist software with admin privileges.


• His HMD is HERE. Anonymous, screened, logging off, etc. etc.


• My single biggest challenge with him is taking him seriously in the dramatic sense. Let me know if I'm ever running too far with the dorky lulz.

Also all my tags have mold on them I am ashame. /SLOWEST. TAGGER.

Moira:

• Derpy redhead researcher with decent mechanical aptitude. And a taste for napalm. On her ice cream.


• Her HMD is HERE and now that I know how to do it, I'll turn screening off.


• Her main challenge is activity, but she has credits now, so CHECK BACK for: apartment!store. It will actually happen, the end is nigh. Also, space prom you guys.

Re: CLU and Moira Brown

[recompiling]

/scrapes the mold off the tags. Good as new?
/P.S. WOULD WAIT FOREVER IF NECESSARY, just fyi

Alas I do not know Moira, even though I keep meaning to buy and play the new Fallout games. Oops :(
However, she is adorably derpy!

But I do know CLU and I love yours to pieces and honestly, I think he has a good balance of '4 srs' and 'nerd lawlz'. And his voice is crazy awesome.

GLaDOS

[glad-2-see-u.livejournal.com]

As played by Hiku, HMD (http://glad-2-see-u.livejournal.com/839.html).

I should post again with her. Hrm.

Re: GLaDOS

[a_perfect_end]

INPUT "What is your name: ", $U
PRINT "Hello "; $U
INPUT "How many ♥'s do you want: ", N
$S = "" FOR I = 1 TO N
$S + "♥"
NEXT I
PRINT $S
INPUT "Do you want more ♥'s? ", $A
IF LEN($A) = 0 THEN 90
$A = $LEFT($A, 1)
IF $A = "Y" OR $A = "y" THEN 30
PRINT "Goodbye ";$U
END

In all seriousness, best. You deserve all the Aperture Science Weighted Companion Cube Devices.

Dug

[dug-the-dog.livejournal.com]

As played by Hiku, HMD (http://dug-the-dog.livejournal.com/1064.html).

Re: Dug

[enough-bodybags.livejournal.com]

Dug is very much spot on. I can hear his derpy voice in every post and just imagine what he's doing. You're doing very well with him.

[idkmybffedi.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOD SO LATE

Joker - Mass Effect - this journal

Anything you've got. This is my first shot at playing him, and I'm playing ME2!Joker while playing ME1 on my X-Box, so I have to keep the two straight... Yeah. Anything you have to say, I'm great hearing it. |D

[timeturntable.livejournal.com]

Although I haven't interacted with you on a particularly huge scale, I have to say from what I remember of Mass Effect (1, sadly) that the voice seems spot on! I can hear Seth Green with every post you make, and I've been kind of stalking all your threads for that reason. xD;

I just noticed this. GO ME! >_<

[whistlesatengineers]

Rookie | Halo 3: ODST | huragokwhistler
Anon |Tron: Evoluction | traceurmonitor

[smellslikejail.livejournal.com]

ANON! ♥

... that's pretty much all I got for Anon. I think he's spot-on, really.

[shipper]

Nepeta Leijon | Homestuck | HMD ahoy

Going to get godawful shipping wall pictures started up this week, since I have it off. IT'S COMING GUYS, I FELT THE NEED TO TELL YOU THAT.

[featheryasshole]

I have said it before, and I will say it again: Your Nepeta. Is. Perfect.

No sorry purrfect.

<3 <3 <3

Dave Strider - Homestuck

[timeturntable.livejournal.com]

I know activity outside my cast's been a big one - I've tried to tag a few other people, but for the most part thanks to activity reasons I tried to make sure I got the new arrivals within my own cast. (I even missed one of those, I'm pretty sure - Equius, I am so, so sorry. ;__; ) However, I am trying to get around to tagging outside the Homestuck cast more often!

Other than that, I'd love any tips on how to improve my characterization with this guy! He's also got an HMD up in his own journal (anon comments on, screened, IP logging off), if you'd rather comment to that. <3

you saw no typo

[teal-deer.livejournal.com]

good brother

best dave

*picks up*

[enough-bodybags.livejournal.com]

RED Medic from Team Fortress 2. Universal crit post is here (new window). (http://what-doyousee.livejournal.com/833.html)

[akuze-survivor.livejournal.com]

Jamison Shepard from Mass Effect 1. HMD post is here (http://akuze-survivor.livejournal.com/961.html).

[smellslikejail.livejournal.com]

Sam Flynn, from Tron: Legacy. Anon-enabled IP-off HMD is here (http://smellslikejail.livejournal.com/866.html).

I still feel hella shaky with Sam, so anything you've got would be super-extra-greatly appreciated.

I know activity is sort of a problem, mostly because school sucks and I picked a stupid time to app in, but I am working on it. Anything beyond that? Hit me!

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

NAW BRO his voice sounds pretty damn IC to me. I have 'tag Sam more' actually written down on my list of things to do, because he's adorable and I love his normal guy reactions to errything going on.

[blackcatjiji.livejournal.com]

Played by Mica: HMD is HERE (http://blackcatjiji.livejournal.com/843.html).

[hyperlethality.livejournal.com]

Noble Six | Halo: Reach | hyperlethality

[blacktwo.livejournal.com]

duuuuuuuur

Is what happens when I try to vocalize my insane love for you. YOU'RE SCARY GOOD AS SIX. It's like THE SIXTH POWER RANGE COMING IN AT THE ELEVENTH HOUR. And you coming in was nothing short of heavenly and perfect. Stay forever. Just....HUR

/falls on, clings to

[standaloneshell.livejournal.com]

Played by Mica: HMD is HERE (http://standaloneshell.livejournal.com/301.html).

[thatisajoke.livejournal.com]

Played by Mica: HMD is HERE (http://thatisajoke.livejournal.com/465.html).

[savor-last-shot.livejournal.com]

Sup guys.

savor_last_shot - Garrus Vakarian.

Honestly, at this point I think I'm going to drop Hicks. I can't get into his head.