http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-01-22 04:36 pm
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JANUARY HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


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[identity profile] dimidiate.livejournal.com 2011-01-22 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
You know how I feel about your One, aka you write her amazingly and her voice is always very strong and clear. Only issue I'd like to bring up is that there have been periods where she's seemed very passive on the station, although I realize a large part of that is probably lack of her team/Noble shoving themselves everywhere/the station not exactly overflowing with things for her to really do. It was nice to see her being so assertive with Carter recently (lmao hi I was stalking that), and I guess what I'm saying is I'd like to see more of that?

Your Kat always makes me go fjkgjdfkjfghghhhhhhhngh in the best way. Her voice is strong and clear and consistent right up there with One's, but when I read them there's never any overlap between the two and just hnnngh never stop okay.

CALL IS CALL I really need to breathe all over her with my cast hurr. Grid should creep on her sometime for... some... reason... Actually like half my cast has a reason to talk to her ahah WE SHOULD MAKE SOMETHING HAPPEN Y/N/diaf vic

[identity profile] oneliners.livejournal.com 2011-01-22 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Part of why I have difficulty with One with that isn't so much that the Spartans aren't shoving themselves everywhere
Disregard that, I suck cocks and read wrong. Yeah, that's exactly it.

but more that One doesn't actually... have the authority to do any of that? She's at the bottom of the pole in ranking and such, and then they're supposed to be putting up a peaceful sort of appearance so she prefers to be quiet Batmom. Stomps in, helps with whatever, then then black 4 stealth slinks into the ~shadows~

sob ty bby

You know I'd be up for anything.
Edited 2011-01-22 23:05 (UTC)

HURRHTMLDURR

[identity profile] dimidiate.livejournal.com 2011-01-22 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
WAIT SO does this mean

One gets

to wear a cape and can her voice changer go batshit and make her all hoarse like Bale

lsmdfkjg let me do some thinking and I'll slam into you on AIM re: Call stuff with some sort of

battle plan
Edited 2011-01-22 23:06 (UTC)

huurrrrrr

[identity profile] oneliners.livejournal.com 2011-01-22 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
jgdfk lmfao i kind of want her voicechanger to go batshit now omg


ok dude