http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2010-11-23 04:36 pm
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HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

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[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2010-11-23 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Zombie: [livejournal.com profile] idkmybffhanna

SHODAN: [livejournal.com profile] machine_god

Bro Strider: [livejournal.com profile] puppetfetishist

they all have HMDs on their journals so yah

[identity profile] heterochromiia.livejournal.com 2010-11-23 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Teal, I love you. I love all the attention and time you put into your characters, from all the crazy HTML you use to put across a sense of SHODAN being, y'know, SHODAN, to the fact that you actually write ill beats for Bro. Good lord. Your devotion to making everything perfect and making a character feel how they should is pretty much legendary, and I love you for it. Soooo muuuuuuch.

Edited 2010-11-23 22:54 (UTC)

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2010-11-24 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
adfdfdfd fdsafdn

&hearts

? :P

i'm legendary now?

legendary piece of shit maybe XDDD but that said I'm glad everything's working so far :3 and I'm glad my raps are not total fail x_X;

(Anonymous) 2010-11-23 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I was wondering how you would pull off a character like Zombie. So far he is spot on! Eh's a pretty cool guy! Takes everything in stride and doesnt afraid of anything.

I have no idea what SHODAN is from, but it scares the shit out of me. Your use of text for it is so creepy and gives such a sense of flow and rhythm. I enjoy stalking everything it responds to simply because it's fun to read.

Also: If I make you my best man, will you rap a toast at my wedding?

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2010-11-24 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
I admit that I am a bit new to Zombie's archetype, and I'm glad I'm doing well so far. I still worry a bit though.

Heeee >3 SHODAN is from an old 90's shooter game that inspired Bioshock, and I'm glad her text is working! :D


OF COURSE I WILL RAP A TOAST AT YOUR WEDDING, ANON :D

[identity profile] cmdr-renegade.livejournal.com 2010-11-23 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, in order:

Zombie: I love your Zombie and I wish there was more with him. I want to read more, I am compelled, he is so awesome.

Shodan: I played system shock just because you apped this. I hope you know that.

Bro: Dude, Bro, Dude. You heard I liked some Bro so you put some Bro in my Strider so I could Bro while I Bro'd.

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2010-11-24 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
So noted about zombie. He's a difficult character to shove at things as he's kind of passive, but I'll try to get him involved in more stuff. Perhaps he'll cook everybody thanksgiving dinner or something. He likes to cook, so...

... then i have done my job right :3 The first one or the second? Either way...


... and just. lol. I TAKE THAT AS AN "I AM ENTERTAINED BY YOUR BRONANIGANS"

[identity profile] cuttlefishcull.livejournal.com 2010-11-24 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
I am so in love with your Bro, he is just. Bro. Which to me is amazing because he's one of those characters that is so awesome yet has so little canon wise. You manage to do so much with him without losing any of his whimsy and well, radness.

I really need to tag that open log :|a

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2010-11-24 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
oh thank goodness! I do worry about his lack of canon and me not getting him down right x_X hopefully I can keep it up :D

YES PLEASE DO.

[identity profile] im-sorry-dave.livejournal.com 2010-11-24 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I want to bad touch your SHODAN more.

And everywhere.

Her and HAL need to debate about humanity and shit over coffee that neither of them can actually drink.