HOW'S MY DRIVING

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HOW'S MY DRIVING


Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, canon, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs, but it's not required.

Comments

MINDY

[knightofdarkness]

NEMESIS PRIME / CONVOY | Transformers; Alternity | knightofdarkness

ROLL LIGHT | Mega Man Powered Up (AUish) | killswithbrooms

Corny

[notsoloyal]

SHOCKWAVE Transformers G1 Dreamwave Comics + CnC CR ▐ notsoloyal

[puncturing]

Clove → The Hunger Games (film) → puncturing → Personal (anon enabled and screened) HMD

I'm a little concerned about how her voice has been coming off. Mainly that she's not suspicious/angry enough. I'm working on trying to jack that up, so suggestions are welcome.

[wilywilyways]

no
you are beautiful and your clove is beautiful
you smell like fairy dust and skittles

Kyra

[driftlock]

Deadlock | Transformers IDW | driftlock | HMD on his DW

Read a thing about people (no one here) being concerned about meta sections of tags being jarring and OOC. I...may have been guilty of that, but will try to be more aware. Please let me know what else I can do to improve. *hides in blanketfort*

Re: Kyra

[notyourchauffeur]

Hi um. I really don't have any crit other than I'd like to see you do more! (mainly for the selfish reason of wanting to play with you hahah).

Mana

[eclectical]

Jade Harley (CR AU) | eclectical | Homestuck

She came in at a pretty crazy time, but I'm definitely gonna start working on getting her out there more!

[circuitry]

Terezi Pyrope (Homestuck) | circuitry

Liara T'Soni (Mass Effect) | asari_scientist

KNOWN ISSUE: I really need to get Liara back in the game. I've been a little scarce with her, and that's not good for such an information oriented character.

Wicke

[wilywilyways]

Marian Hawke
Dragon Age 2

Just this gal here on this ol' journal.

Zak

[tactile_telekinesis]

Conner Kent || tactile_telekinesis

DC Comics



Kurt Wagner || fuzzyelf

Marvel 616

Lainie

[slenderbot]

• Soundwave | Transformers: Prime | slenderbot

Still got Isaac but he's curbed for now while I figure out what I wanna do with him

[arlenadja]

Arle Nadja | Madou Monogatari / Puyo Puyo | arlenadja

Micah | Rune Factory | hybridharvester

Ida

[cashflow]

MICHIKO MALANDRO | cashflow

And of course, if you'd rather remain anonymous, or comment in an otherwise discreet fashion, you can head right over to the personal HMD or PM me.

[ex_flyting687]

Billy Kaplan | Young Avengers | assguardian
Loki | Marvel Cinematic | flyting

Both have anon HMDs on their journals, too, I think.

Notes: Activity and game involvement for both characters are on my list of things to improve on. Concerns about Loki that have been brought up before are being addressed, and Billy's up for a canon review because I feel I'm on uneven ground with him lately.

Help with everything else would be appreciated.

Stupei

[notromanceable]

James Vega | Mass Effect | notromanceable

Notes: He has an HMD on his journal, anon-enabled and IP logging off. I'm aware that my activity has been atrocious, but I am hoping to fix that. orz

[vilified]

Nepeta Leijon | Homestuck | shipper
Doug Rattmann | Portal | vilified

alicia.

[defiances]

kimber benton ; defiances

Varis

[allianceman]

Kaidan Alenko // allianceman (Mass Effect)

Bethany Hawke // fadedsunshine (Dragon Age 2)

[featheryasshole]

Davesprite | Homestuck | featheryasshole

Anarin

[spaceracist]

Emile | Halo: Reach (AU) | spaceracist
Delta | Red vs. Blue (AU) | alaspooryork
Gibson | Tron: Evolution (CRAU) | userless

Brig

[just_desserts]

Gabriel | Supernatural | just_desserts | Journal HMD

O'Brien | Halo Legends | sniperbitch | Journal HMD"

notes: current activity is a disgrace yes

Kristi

[usually_subtext]

John Watson | Sherlock BBC | usually_subtext

Inara Serra | Firefly/Serenity | theambassador


All inclusive HMD<.a>

sam

[tordenen]

Thor || Marvel Ultimates || tordenen

[clowcaptor]

Sakura Kinomoto
Cardcaptor Sakura
clowcaptor

KARI

[flonnezilla]

ARCHANGEL FLONNE | Disgaea | flonnezilla
DAVE STRIDER | Homestuck | seeing_idawg

Aside from the usual comments on activity, all stuff is appreciated! 8|b I know I've been doing some questionable stuff with Dave lately, and I plan to canon review for Flonne as soon as I get back to my PS3 sob, so... yeah!

[(Anonymous)]

A few things I've been contemplating about Dave for a bit. I understood the need for a canon update, especially after he had been in one place for so long. Canon updates can be very helpful, but I feel like you didn't do much with it; I don't know exactly where he canon updated from, but certainly there was enough canon in between his previous point and god tier that it should have made a little more of a difference. Dave moved from a moment of doubt to a moment of personal triumph in canon. He finally did something heroic in his life (something not overshadowed by another person), and ascended to god tier immediately after. What I don't understand is how his change in character is being represented in your Dave interpretation. Even with the modifications made in Singularity (the mutations, having to kill his friends, etc) I think that Dave would be attempting to retain a lot more of what he more recently experienced in canon. I may be wrong, but immediately after he got back, he seemed to slip back into the familiar "been there, done that" personality of pre-canon update. I think it's mostly the jaded tendency that throws me off, especially since Dave has never been particularly good at acting jaded in canon (see: his multiple deaths).

Another thing is that I think you tend to prioritize tags. Not in a necessarily bad way, but in a way that's noticeable if you aren't, say, one of the Homestuck cast. Also getting CR with you sometimes seems challenging, because in particularly engaging threads you drop off of the face of the planet. These two things tend to go side by side -- overall I think you play quite a lovely Dave (one of my favorites), but sometimes you come off as slightly unapproachable if you don't already have either a predetermined relationship with Dave, or extensive CR that seems to be built up through sheer determination.

VIC

[scratchback]

★ Michael Altman (reunified) » dead space
★ Knock Out (scratchback) » transformers prime
★ Legion (cohesions) » mass effect

I also play the NPCS Tria (apothanasia) and Etan (contention). Points of concern I'm fairly aware of are Legion's voice, Knock Out's activity, and general slow tagging/thread dropping. If I ever drop a thread with you that you'd like to continue, please please please hit me on AIM (@vicioushallway) or plurk (@teamkill). Chances are I felt bad for letting it sit so long and got tag-shy. The same goes for if I'm tagging too slow for you or just generally not showing up to the party like I should be.

[notyourchauffeur]

Skyfire (CRAU) | notyourchauffeur