singularityooc | MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

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MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING

Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs.

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

I feel like you could probably benefit from trimming down your roster some. As it is, it feels like you don't put enough focus into your characters, and they often come across as pretty bland. I'd say pick the ones you have the strongest voice for, and work on making them stronger; put more thought into your tags and into why they are saying and doing the things they do, and what you can do that would be even more demonstrative of the character. Even if you don't end up writing all of that into your tags, the effort will show.

Also, sometimes it feels like you use OOC notes to brag about how awesome your characters are? This is mostly just with Motoko and maybe EDI and Obi-Wan, but it comes across kind of weird. However, this is just a minor complaint.

Yeah. I'll stop apping people, then. I guess the thing is that the other games I was in, I've either left, or they've ended. Thanks for letting me know, you uh...

...anonymous people.

Please don't be PA about this. There is nothing wrong with leaving anonymous, wellmeaning crit.

I apologize for sounding passive-aggressive. It was completely unintentional. I use my speaking voice when replying OOC and I just talk like this. It's very frustrating.

In the future, if I sound passive-aggressive, will you please tell me? It's something I want to avoid.

We're telling you right now. You sound passive-aggressive. Take a moment to read what you're saying before you hit "Post Comment."

okay. thank you.

sorry.

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

Re: Mica's Peeps

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also agreed

Mica's Peeps

Different anon

nevermind I deleted it because it was stupid.

Re: nevermind I deleted it because it was stupid.

Re: nevermind I deleted it because it was stupid.