http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-03-18 08:42 pm
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MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

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[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Parker is amazing. I laugh, every time— and I don't know her canon, but I do know that the way you write her is very consistent. So, if anything, you have certainly not gotten less in-character?

I don't ave a lot of crit for Sarah, because I have a bad memory, but I wanted to comment on how she just kinda takes over on John all the time. It's hilarious, and so exactly what I'd picture a mom doing in this situation, particularly one like Sarah. I wouldn't have thought of it.


Geordi, you just need more friends for him to talk to, and then he'll have more opportunity and reasons to talk, yeah? Branch out and tag all the people, when event-time opens back up to normaltime.

[identity profile] originaljoe.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:09 am (UTC)(link)
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[identity profile] smellslikejail.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:09 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, so I'm pre' sure you already know how much I love playing off of Ed, but here goes anyway.

I love the way you managed to turn a guy with approximately .005 seconds of canon (and a hella sweet waistcoat) into a 3-D character with, like, a personality beyond being the Hypercompetent Sidekick (while still keeping the hella sweet waistcoat). He's tons of fun to bounce off of, I love the fact that he managed to actually take charge of shit in the SHODAN plot, and if Ed isn't portrayed exactly the way you play him in Tron 3? I will cry.

tl;dr: I love you, never change, etc. etc.

Re: VIC'S LOT

[identity profile] nobleleader.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
klamsmf I love the stuff you do with Prism and his voice is the one I hear strongest like-- when I'm reading the stuff, I totally see the perky HERPDERP and you are the loveliest vicious little monitor ever c:

Also hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jorge I just cannot even. He's so glorious and lovely and I want to take him home :(

[identity profile] cuttlefishcull.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :> Yeah, I have been terribly inactive with him, something I plan on fixing :X He's still reeling from Dead Space stuff so it'll be an interesting next few weeks

HE COULD USE MORE FRIENDSSSS mostly his CR is with Jack, who. Yeah if you play the game you understand :|b he really needs more people to harass, part of my 'I need to get out more with him'

[identity profile] smellslikejail.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
How are you the most amazing Flynn player to ever exist? Seriously. I'm beginning to suspect you're actually a thousand-year-old Zen master. Basically, your Flynn is amazing, you're amazing, and I'm so thrilled to get to bounce off of him on a regular basis.

[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Yeeaaah...you did, a little, but as it turns out "RL jumped down my throat" is a valid excuse, and considering the context, you actually ended up...



Regardless, SHODAN is pretty in character, yes. Don't break yourself down, just get up and go, yeah? In b4 tiger blood and adonis dna

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! And yesss, I am totally interested. He's currently in the process of getting rescued, so once Flynn is out of CLU's clutches, we should totally have them meet.:)

[identity profile] savor-last-shot.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
I play with your Fef in two places and they're both consistently awesome. This one is a bit different of course (as she should be), but I still love her. She's very much Feferi - she cares about her friends and does her best, even if she is carefree. Or tries to be.

Holy shit am I happy I have a template for this

[identity profile] has-a-hardline.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
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[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
I just realized that the crit I gave was pretty useless, actually. Oh well.

I think the plot was just a shitty timing issue for you. Next time will be even more awesomer. I loved this plot. Loved it.

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Sarah's still convinced that her (four years older than her) son needs her to make all the decisions for him, yeah. Eventually she'll start easing up a bit, I hope, but I'm glad it comes off as making sense for her.

And yes, introing Geordi just before the big event was hard...so we'll see how his voice comes once things settle down.

/pokeball

[identity profile] oneliners.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
YOU SUCK AND ALL YOUR CHARS SUCK.


no i love you and I'm glad you are our Thom. 8( HE IS SO AMAZING AND LIKE, i utterly adore him now. So much fondness.

CHIEF IS GREAT AND YOU SHOULD FEEL GREAT.

[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
I'm sure that most of my peeps would be up for chatting with him. Jiji at least, is all about self-determination and all that Ayn Rand stuff.

Cats. Y'know?

And it doesn't take much to get either of the Motokos going on the subject pertaining to philosophical wankery. Marj will do anything for attention right now and...uh...

...no, don't let him talk to Obi-Wan, the dude's superpower is figuring out people's moral alignment. XD




anyways ya. My crit boils down to "I like your words, make more of them"

[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
I'm struggling with trying to figure out the intro timing for a character I've just apped, so I might be in the same boat. (presuming she's accepted before everything ends and makes my fretting moot, lol)

I think part of the problem is that, being that he hangs out in engineering, he's not generally portrayed as a very....er...socially aggressive guy? That's not the right phrase, but it's close, I think.
theuserabides: (Joy follows them like a shadow)

[personal profile] theuserabides 2011-03-19 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
Toothless is delightful. You're having to overcome a handicap with a mute character who can't type, which is like the silent protag problem on crack, and you handle it beautifully.
theuserabides: (One who is skilled in goodness)

[personal profile] theuserabides 2011-03-19 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
TNG is, like, engraved on my brain, so if Geordi were off, I'd have noticed. ;)

Flynn's technically out now, but busy hacking. The event threads are going to be back-tagged forever and a day, but it's Flynn, so it's not like it's gonna change how he behaves. x3

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
I got linked to the Convoy/Shockwave/Dug log super late, and I know nothing about Convoy or Transformers in general, but I have to say, that thread was golden. A sentient car was just what this game needed.
recompiling: (A Shining Light in the Darkness)

[personal profile] recompiling 2011-03-19 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
The Rookie | Halo 3: ODST | [livejournal.com profile] huragokwhistler

Anon | Tron: Evolution | [livejournal.com profile] traceurmonitor


Notes
- In b4 post moar. Anon should have something going up in the next week or so once the plot's wrapped up and should be getting back to tagging non-Tron folks around the same time. Rookie I'm iffy on; I think I need to post zombie-him doing something, so hopefully a post in the near future...?
- Still tweaking around a little with getting their voices distinct, which will probably be easier now, but I'd like people's two cents anyway. Are either of them behaving too much like the other?
-Both of them have HMDs: Rookie's is here, and Anon's is here.

[identity profile] creepersphere.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
I'M VERY HAPPY YOU ARE OUR THOM/CHIEF. Their voices are spot on and you do an excellent job of filling out Thom c:

[identity profile] lewdness.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Seconding Vic with the whole bit about Zaeed. Hhhhghghsfh he's perfect in every way never change.

Also, I love what you've done with Black-Two, baby. ♥

ALBA

[identity profile] eighttotwelve.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
THANE KRIOS | [livejournal.com profile] eighttotwelve | Mass Effect
NOTES: Has had a lot of crap he's been through during the SHODAN and Dead Space events alike. As such, he's a little more bitter, a lot more angry, and a fair bit more violent towards his enemies. Ultimately, he feels like a failure to the Normandy crew, but he won't be talking about any of this unless Shepard asks

ALEJANDRO BORGES | [livejournal.com profile] cousinisdeeeead | Dead Space: Aftermath
NOTES: I haven't really been able to do much with him. Mostly, he's cursing and feeling miserable and hating everything ever and silently crying about his dead cousin. Recommendations would be awesome.

SOUNDWAVE | [livejournal.com profile] allshock_notalk | Transformers: G1 Cape&Cowl AU
NOTES: Effectively dead and became a necromorph for this event. I'm debating what to do with him and may have to sling him onto hiatus.

Re: MILO

[identity profile] eighttotwelve.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
sobbbb i miss you being around where you at bro

[identity profile] creepersphere.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
All of your characters make me roll around wetting myself in glee.

TOOTHLESS IS SPOT ON and adorable and you do an awesome job conveying both his intelligence and his... well, animal...ness. Nonhumanitude? Fuck idk I'm just making words up here now.

KANAYA WAS THE BEST MOM ;A; And I love your handle of her voice.

You will forever be THE Tucker to me, tits or no. You've played her consistently amazingly well since I first met you and just. Hnnngh. You're doing it so right.

HAL is the only one I'm semi-unfamiliar with the canon of, but he's an absolute joy to tag and play with. ;u;

[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
I believe you already know my opinion on your Motoko so. More bitchiness, please. :B We can always backtag on that symmetrical-violence log? Yes?

I like Flynn, except his zen moves keep cutting the legs out from under all the juicy conflict. Which is probably IC for him, but still. B|

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