http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-03-18 08:42 pm
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MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

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[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
All of my journals have screened, anon-enabled, non-IP-tracking HMDs, so feel free to post here or there!

Sarah Connor ([livejournal.com profile] hows_the_knee) Journal HMD (http://hows-the-knee.livejournal.com/528.html?mode=reply)

Parker ([livejournal.com profile] theniputitback) Journal HMD (http://theniputitback.livejournal.com/1006.html?mode=reply)

Geordi La Forge ([livejournal.com profile] a_breach_aint_1) Journal HMD (http://a-breach-aint-1.livejournal.com/935.html?mode=reply)

I KNOW I NEED TO BE MORE ACTIVE with Geordi...I am having a really hard time feeling confident with his voice. Apart from his intro post (http://community.livejournal.com/singularity_rpg/109007.html), he's also had a little bit of awkwardness with Kaylee (http://community.livejournal.com/singularity_rpg/128946.html) and then got nabbed by GLaDOS. (http://community.livejournal.com/singularitylogs/55540.html?thread=3078388#t3078388)

Crit is more than welcome for all three of them, but I'm especially hoping for suggestions for him. Thanks, guys.:)
theuserabides: (Things are just as they are.)

[personal profile] theuserabides 2011-03-19 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Plot hit before I could do that post I planned for Flynn and Geordi (which we should do if you're still interested), but FWIW, I didn't notice anything off about his voice during your intro?

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! And yesss, I am totally interested. He's currently in the process of getting rescued, so once Flynn is out of CLU's clutches, we should totally have them meet.:)
theuserabides: (One who is skilled in goodness)

[personal profile] theuserabides 2011-03-19 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
TNG is, like, engraved on my brain, so if Geordi were off, I'd have noticed. ;)

Flynn's technically out now, but busy hacking. The event threads are going to be back-tagged forever and a day, but it's Flynn, so it's not like it's gonna change how he behaves. x3

[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Parker is amazing. I laugh, every time— and I don't know her canon, but I do know that the way you write her is very consistent. So, if anything, you have certainly not gotten less in-character?

I don't ave a lot of crit for Sarah, because I have a bad memory, but I wanted to comment on how she just kinda takes over on John all the time. It's hilarious, and so exactly what I'd picture a mom doing in this situation, particularly one like Sarah. I wouldn't have thought of it.


Geordi, you just need more friends for him to talk to, and then he'll have more opportunity and reasons to talk, yeah? Branch out and tag all the people, when event-time opens back up to normaltime.

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Sarah's still convinced that her (four years older than her) son needs her to make all the decisions for him, yeah. Eventually she'll start easing up a bit, I hope, but I'm glad it comes off as making sense for her.

And yes, introing Geordi just before the big event was hard...so we'll see how his voice comes once things settle down.

[identity profile] inkstolen.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
I'm struggling with trying to figure out the intro timing for a character I've just apped, so I might be in the same boat. (presuming she's accepted before everything ends and makes my fretting moot, lol)

I think part of the problem is that, being that he hangs out in engineering, he's not generally portrayed as a very....er...socially aggressive guy? That's not the right phrase, but it's close, I think.

[identity profile] howkickassiam.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
Hhhh oh my god /paws at.

Seriously, I'm so glad York and Sarah have their...thingything and that they're friends and fhsgushf you are the bestest of the bestest, babycakes. ♥

NO YOU'RE THE BESTEST

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 07:27 am (UTC)(link)
♥ ♥ ♥

Sarah would be so much less sane (yeah...think about that for a minute) in space ai crazyland without York around to help keep her grounded. I always have fun tagging with you and I'm so glad you're enjoying it too, bb.♥
notjelly: (hu hu hu hu you're funny)

[personal profile] notjelly 2011-03-19 07:09 am (UTC)(link)
geordi's username is basically one of the greatest things i've ever seen on lj jsyk

and sarah is best sarah

i like what i've seen of parker but can't comment since i don't know the canon

[identity profile] theniputitback.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
:D That username was a (very rare) lightning stroke of inspiration.

And thank you, I'm glad you like them.♥ ♥ also everyone should watch Leverage
sopor_pies: (HoNk)

[personal profile] sopor_pies 2011-03-19 07:45 am (UTC)(link)
i have heard amazing things about leverage and i'm pretty curious about it :Oa

[identity profile] a-breach-aint-1.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 08:11 am (UTC)(link)
You should totally track it down. It's kinda silly sometimes, but it's a lot of fun.:D And, obviously, I'm a big fan of the characters.