HOW'S MY DRIVING MAY '11

[singularitymods.livejournal.com]

HOW'S MY DRIVING

Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs.

Comments

Stefan

[savor-last-shot.livejournal.com]

Garrus Vakarian - savor_last_shot - Mass Effect

Roheze Lelande (Rose Lalonde AU) - trollalonde - Homestuck


Main thing I'm worried about is activity. Also feel like I'm losing Roheze's voice for some reason.

Either way, crit welcomed!

EDIT: Fuck yeah, first.

Stefan

[hyperlethality.livejournal.com]

hurrrngh, I very much love your Garrus. I can hear him in his tags, see his mannerisms... I see no problems here! PLEASE STAY FOREVER

ALBA AULBATH

[eighttotwelve.livejournal.com]

Thane Krios | Mass Effect | eighttotwelve
Alejandro Borges | Dead Space: Aftermath | cousinisdeeeead
Depth Charge | Beast Wars | thebatmanta


Depth Charge is new sooooo he hasn't done anything much yet other than be a jerk. Yyyyaaayyy.

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

Alejandro, I know nothing about your canon. BUT, anyone that can take firebending and spin it into a good steak? Good in my books. I WILL LEARN MORE CANON TO GIVE BETTER FEEDBACK, PROMISE.

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

Jonah da Headhunter (Halo) - gruntwedgie

Hey, he's had one post, but never hurts, bb. (Except the first time, wink wink.)

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

/mashes face on

I need to finish reading Evolution because Jonah is amazing.

[thom-293.livejournal.com]

Just the two boys!

thom_293 || Personal HMD (http://thom-293.livejournal.com/1061.html?mode=reply)

and

givesbackbombs || Personal HMD (http://givesbackbombs.livejournal.com/1281.html?mode=reply)



Crit can also be directed to me over AIM (@vonnerdyce) or to the entries linked (anon/ip should be off, but if they're not let me know here and I'll fix it?)


Basically, any crit would be welcome like you cannot believe, especially for John. I also know I have a problem with dropping threads, haha, that one I'm trying to work on.

\o/

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

GOD, THOM, YOUR NAME IS SO DORKY.

NEGL. Been stalking your John threads, lovin' them. I can hear you having some trouble at times, but I see you doin' the canon review and suspect it's more that John's not the sort that gets up and interacts with other people. He's not the head cheerleader and you're maybe used to playing someone a little more... SUP, I TALK AT YOU. Maybe it's throwing you off a bit?

[magebind.livejournal.com]

creepersphere
// (http://creepersphere.livejournal.com/1316.html)

dismembers
// (http://dismembers.livejournal.com/1058.html)

noblefive
// (http://noblefive.livejournal.com/882.html)

reunified
// (http://harpocratic.livejournal.com/773.html)

dimidiate
// (http://derezzes.livejournal.com/826.html)

dimidiate
// (http://magebind.livejournal.com/865.html)

Known issues: Activity and thread dropping, ashjfhgkfjg. I'm in the middle of playing catchup after life sort of bent me over the table and had its way with me, so I apologize for being a total tool in that regard.

[hisoldgirl]

I very, very much love your Prism, both stalking and interacting with him. He's so gloriously amoral.

And Ram is just aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah socute I can't even

[catchthebrit.livejournal.com]

Wheatley | Portal | catchthebrit 

I'd seriously love some feedback or critique.

[whistlesatengineers]

I will preface by saying I love the heck out of Portal and that I have played through 2 a gazillion times now.

That said, I really like your Wheatley. He's adorable and pissy and I read him with Merchant's voice. I just want to pick him up and hug him forever.

Delta + Emile

[alaspooryork]

What it says on the tin. Both have anon-enabled HMDs in their journals.

Character: Delta (alaspooryork)
Canon: Red vs. Blue (AU)
Notes: AU is essentially the "York Lives" version. Has been in Sing since the beginning; was recently a dragon.

Character: Emile-A239 (evaskullface)
Canon: Halo: Reach (AU)
Notes: AU is the Grunt Birthday Party. I realize he's not very social....

Emile

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

I hear him. Every tag. That is so rare that I just have to applaud.

[survivethesiren]

Gem | survivethesiren | and just for information her wiki entry, to help with any AU questions.

[fuckinghubble]

I have to admit, I'm impressed with how well you've done with Gem despite what little screentime she has. I wouldn't have pegged for for being an appable character Raimi probably would though IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN. ANYWAY, I like what you've done with her, and I wanted to thank you for all the awesome threads and CR I've had with her so far.

/derp derp offers nothing constructive or helpful

[hisoldgirl]

Just this girl

The TARDIS || Doctor Who || hisoldgirl || HMD

[magebind.livejournal.com]

bkjgbhjfdg I absolutely love your TARDIS, and I love all my interactions with her and I really need to stop dropping threads with her oh lawdy. I'm not familiar with her canon, but she's always so delightfully haughty and... I want to say inhuman? She's such a treat to see around ingame c:

Skyfire

[notyourchauffer.livejournal.com]

Skyfire | Transformers (AU Cape and Cowl) | notyourchauffer

Been kind of shaky with him, pretty unsure.

Re: Skyfire

[eighttotwelve.livejournal.com]

I know that you've been worried about Skyfire since you came back in, honey. But bias aside, I know that I've been delighted with the stupidass hijinks that you're letting me do. And I really appreciate it. Skyfire is perfectly sweet while being secretly depressed.

I've had a blast so far. I hope you have too.

[wilywilyways.livejournal.com]

Marian Hawke - wilywilyways - Dragon Age

Trishka Novak - lovelybitter - Bulletstorm

I'm trying to get Trishka active more, and work on her execution. Crit is ALWAYS welcome!!

[nobleleader.livejournal.com]

SHRIEK I have only watched Nie play DA2 so far but fksghsfnsfh your Hawke is delightful and made of all things good in the world. ♥

They Call Her--Odd

[popcorngifs.livejournal.com]

[eighttotwelve.livejournal.com]

fine piece of ass

[nobleleader.livejournal.com]

howkickassiam | York | Red vs Blue


nobleleader | Carter | Halo: Reach



Herpderp. Anon enabled shit in both their LJs!

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

...that icon is going to give me nightmares.

Your Carter's one of the reasons I joined? I know you feel some pressure about playing such a central character, but you pull it off and he comes across as the leader he's meant to be.

Gamzee Makara (AU)

[feartheclown.livejournal.com]

Character: Gamzee Makara
Canon: Homestuck
Notes: He's an AU where he went sober without going crazy. Basically a broken timeline.

I also have a HMD post here (http://smileanderror.livejournal.com/2840.html) with anon enabled.

[supernova1006]

I

love your Gamzee

so

freaking much

Oh my god it's so fun to play my Gamzee off of him *A*

MILO

[azulescarabajo.livejournal.com]

Jaime Reyes/Blue Beetle III| DC Comics | azulescarabajo

Rainbow Dash | My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic | mylittlebrony

Mordin Solus | Mass Effect | modelscientist

Crit me baby, one more time?

[gottakilldaves]

Jack Noir (Homestuck, AU) | sfx_balls
Azure Kite (.hack//G.U., AU) | azureflamegod

Personal HMD here! Feedback, critique, general AU questions, anything's cool with me BVb

Haven't been terribly active/good with tags lately due to A MILLION THINGS HAPPENING AT ONCE IRL/RP-wise but I'm working on that really 8|

edit: wow im so awesome i totally forgot to add kite /headdesk

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

Haven't threaded with you yet, but I have read some of your early Kite threads. You've paid a lot of attention to the canon and made it work. I can really appreciate that you play him solidly, according to his canon.

(Yeah, secret .hack//lover, lol)

[fuckinghubble]

Just this asshole here. Who the fuck is he, anyway?

Raimi Matthews // Broken Saints // HMD

[survivethesiren]

Well as I've already said, I don't know Raimi's canon, but I think he's *amazing*. You really are willing to try different things with narrative thought, and really delve into what Raimi is doing on the inside, as oppose to what he is showing on the outside.

It isn't an easy thing to do, and you do it well.

[theuserabides]

Kevin Flynn | Tron | theuserabides
Major Kusanagi (movie-verse) | Ghost in the Shell | electroniccrane

Notes: I know the Major's activity is practically non-existent. I fully intend to step it up in June.

For both, please hit me up--doesn't have to be here; both accounts have contact posts--if I agreed to do something with you and it looks like I've forgotten. I'm not intentionally snubbing you. I just have a terrible memory for task lists. (Stupid trivia, on the other hand, I have covered.)

[sniperbitch.livejournal.com]

Best Flynn. End of line.

[theshirtlessiso.livejournal.com]

The main thing I'm worried about right now is activity, to be honest. Gibson needs to make friends outside his cast, Stephen needs to make friends period, and I need to stop being so busy so I can actually tag things without being on a perma-slowatus. (And I'd just like to apologize again to everyone I'm threading with for being so hideously slow. I promise I'll get better once the first half of the summer is over…)

Still, hit me with what you've got!

Character HMDs are anon-enabled, IP-logging off, if you'd prefer to do things that way.

[popcorngifs.livejournal.com]

A CR With Me Meme would cure all of your cross-canon ills. I've never had a problem CR'ing with you and you've never been on slow/hiatus without good reason. IRL first, brosis.

You keep doing your thing, it ain't nothin' but. (read: Gibson is the best little teenage rebellion butthead and Stephen just needs his chance to shine never change)

[a_perfect_end]

CLU - (a_perfect_end) - Tron: Legacy

Your best bet of reaching me is by Plurk.

It's the only thing in my online life I actively check and make time for. I respond to it faster than RP tags. Ask my castmates. XD

Known Issues: Droppin' the threads. I totally do it. Also, slow tagger in general.

ETA: HMD/crit post is on the character journal itself. Should be locked to the top.

[supernova1006]

So I haven't seen many Clu's around, but yours is hands down the best I've seen. Oh god seeing his relationships play out is just amazing and also tragic.

[witchmaker.livejournal.com]

witchmaker || Angela || SD3

notaneggbaby || Conrit || Original

Angela is my problem child. I worry about her irritating people, and her voice tends to slip on me now and then. Conrit's starting to come into his own, I think, but he's fairly new.

I apologize if I've dropped any threads. I try not to, but now and then it happens. Also if you'd rather not I tag you with either of them, just let me know. I won't judge.

[supernova1006]

WHO EVEN ARE YOU


















ilu. so hard.

liana

[halfquake.livejournal.com]

Terezi Pyrope (Homestuck) | legislacerator
Chell (Portal) | halfquake

Known issue: activity!
Sorry I haven't been around as much as I should have, but I'm trying to work on that now.

[supernova1006]

Haven't threaded with Chell, but your Terezi is just so goddamn amazing and fun to watch.

Buttercup!

[hows-the-knee.livejournal.com]

I have anon enabled/screened/ip-logging-free HMDs at all my character's journals, so feel free to comment here or there.

Sarah Connor (Terminator 2) | hows_the_knee
Parker (Leverage) | theniputitback
Jack Sparrow (Pirates of the Caribbean) | myeffectsplease

Feedback welcomed! Jack is very new so any crit for him would be especially awesome.

Re: Buttercup!

[notyourchauffer.livejournal.com]

I seriously enjoyed Parker threadcrashing in the shenanigans log for the Normandy hijinks. Pretty much the best ever, negl.

[emberandash.livejournal.com]

Azula (AU) | emberandash | personal HMD (http://emberandash.livejournal.com/545.html)

Still new, still spammy, still really really nervous about playing her here with all you amazing people! Any feedback of any kind is appreciated.

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

Just sayin': Hearing Azula against Zuko was downright eerie accurate to the characters.

Bayley

[fatebranded.livejournal.com]

Sooooo totally fresh meat still, but hey, can't hurt!

Zuko | fatebranded | Avatar: The Last Airbender

[gruntwedgie.livejournal.com]

What's this Zuko? Zu-ki-OHHHH.

...

I have always and will always love your Zuko, bb. Nuff said. EXCEPT I AM SAYING MORE. I can hear him all the time. All his trying to be suave, all his frustrations, all his HONOUUURRRRR!!!