http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-05-30 08:09 pm
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HOW'S MY DRIVING MAY '11

HOW'S MY DRIVING


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[identity profile] catchthebrit.livejournal.com 2011-05-31 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
Wheatley | Portal | [livejournal.com profile] catchthebrit 

I'd seriously love some feedback or critique.
whistlesatengineers: ((Helmetless) Lawl)

[personal profile] whistlesatengineers 2011-05-31 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
I will preface by saying I love the heck out of Portal and that I have played through 2 a gazillion times now.

That said, I really like your Wheatley. He's adorable and pissy and I read him with Merchant's voice. I just want to pick him up and hug him forever.

[identity profile] catchthebrit.livejournal.com 2011-05-31 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
I really need to make another run through of Portal 2, but I'll probably do it in a month or so when I've forgotten the puzzles.
Or I'll just derp on custom co-op maps forever.

Thank you very much!

[identity profile] halfquake.livejournal.com 2011-05-31 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I really don't have anything constructive praise- or criticism-wise because I am too busy mashing my face against my screen, going, "YESSSSSSS," at all your tags.

good Saria, best Wheatley ♥

[identity profile] catchthebrit.livejournal.com 2011-06-01 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
I AM BLUSHING EVERYWHERE.

Thank you!
supernova1006: (glee)

[personal profile] supernova1006 2011-06-01 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
omg your wheatley

so amazing

[identity profile] catchthebrit.livejournal.com 2011-06-01 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
sfsfdsfsdfwuie

thank you so much.
autodidacticrobogirl: (inconsistent with efficiency)

[personal profile] autodidacticrobogirl 2011-06-01 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Wheatley is brilliant and your voice for him comes through perfectly. Don't be afraid to use ellipses and don't worry— you're doin' it right.

I seriously laugh out loud every time I read a thread of yours. Have confidence, Wheatley Skywalker. (vader breathing)

[identity profile] catchthebrit.livejournal.com 2011-06-01 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
I was actually concerned that I was abusing the ellipses I was already using, so this is a very, very good thing!

Awww, thanks so much. <3 I'm glad I can make others laugh with my character's antics!
autodidacticrobogirl: (my joy to share a planet)

[personal profile] autodidacticrobogirl 2011-06-01 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
I think the only bad thing to be said about it all is that it seems to me that it might be hard to maintain this level of excellence as time goes on.

But I know you can do it! Say "no" to characterization slumps!

[identity profile] catchthebrit.livejournal.com 2011-06-01 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
If I start to get out of character, just whack me a few times with a newspaper.