http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-03-18 08:42 pm
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MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


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BETTER LATE THAN NEVER?

[identity profile] thom-293.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 08:23 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't seen much of/interacted at all with Joker, but omg Arkady. She is adorable beyond words - from what little I've seen of Thingimaangeljigger you've managed to take a character that's already wonderfully fleshed out and enhance her even further.

It doesn't hurt any that your writing is very stylistically beautiful, it flows easily and is simplistic while still being enjoyable to read and write around. <333

Crit, hmm... although I haven't felt this way about our stuff, I think sometimes you can let CR develop a bit too fast? I could be way off base, seeing as how I don't really know how Arkady functions canonically around New People, but maybe it's just something to keep an eye on, yeah? <333

but gosh, I love her so much. I need to sit down and read this comic and YOU ARE THE ONLY REASON WHY I WOULD PUT THAT MUCH EFFORT INTO CENTRALIZING MY ATTENTION SPAN FOR LONGER THAN THREE MINUTES.

Re: BETTER LATE THAN NEVER?

(Anonymous) 2011-03-20 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you like her. And even better, I'm glad you're so enthusiastic about my writing style. My RP-style isn't too similar to my actual novel-style, but it's encouraging that you feel that way regardless, because I've been trying to get my ass back in gear for the latter.

As for developing CR too fast... a few things.
1) I will totally take that into account, keep that in mind, etc. Thanks. :)
2) Ffff, that's hilarious, because someone just told me I'm one of the few people they know who doesn't rush CR, and it's "refreshing".
3) If you're just meaning with Arkady, it probably does seem that way. Arkady's a special child. She's your BFF in ten seconds flat, in canon. Even if the person doesn't feel the same way about her in return.
4) Repeat of Point Number 1. :D

o7 ♥

Re: BETTER LATE THAN NEVER?

[identity profile] chikkinz.livejournal.com 2011-03-20 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
....That above comment was me. Idek how I went anon.

Re: BETTER LATE THAN NEVER?

[identity profile] thom-293.livejournal.com 2011-03-20 04:03 am (UTC)(link)
Clearly LJ is picking up on your ninja vibes. IT KNOWS THE TRUTH, TRACE, RUN.

Yeah, that's all pretty reasonable. It's not really anything that's been bugging me specifically? I fucking love her and Thom's CR IT IS MY FAVOURITE. \o/