http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-03-18 08:42 pm
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MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


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poisonousflame: (OOC - soooooooo pretty!)

[personal profile] poisonousflame 2011-03-19 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
AXEL | Kingdom Hearts | [livejournal.com profile] poisonousflame


Notes:
- Activity is an issue that I'm veeery much aware of, and am trying to improve.
- Character-wise, he's starting to develop a bit differently than I thought he would. :|a ANY CRIT WOULD BE AWESOME.
Edited 2011-03-19 02:31 (UTC)

[identity profile] eighttotwelve.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
kasarin

/grabby hands at D:
poisonousflame: (you don't remember?)

[personal profile] poisonousflame 2011-03-19 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
/reaches fooooooor ;~;

[identity profile] eighttotwelve.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
COME HERE, PERSON WITH MY SON'S VOICE
poisonousflame: (so close to hope)

[personal profile] poisonousflame 2011-03-20 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
/slow--

/run--

/towards--!

[identity profile] eighttotwelve.livejournal.com 2011-03-22 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
/EMBRAAAACE

[identity profile] givesbackbombs.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
Okay.

I'm gonna just come out and say this.

I am not a big Roxas fan. But your Axel? Has made me seriously consider picking him up because you just. HNRGH BABY. I can hear his voice in everything you do with him, and you manage to have this... little undercurrent of Nobody!Sadness floating around him that just makes me want to put him in a frilly pink basket and feed him SEA SALT ICE CREAM. Your diction is spot on and you catch a lot of facets to him that I think most people ignore or overlook in favour of OMG WOOBIES!!! I like that you haven't forgotten he's ruthless, that he's deceptive, that he can be a total jerkass and still come out of it being a pretty good friend. Your writing and diction both suit him perfectly as well, it's nice to see such a solid gestalt.

Basically: you play him the way I've always wanted to see him played. And that makes you badass. \o/

[identity profile] eighttotwelve.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
THIS basically
poisonousflame: (excitement)

[personal profile] poisonousflame 2011-03-20 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
So I legit had to get up and FLAIL when I read this.

And then I couldn't think of what to say beyond lajsdfoihaosijnawenjndavnnajdfoiasjfjasldfnasdf

AND I'M STILL PRETTY INCOHERENT because that is. ajsdlfjalsdjfasdf THANK YOU SO MUCH AHHHHHHHHHHHH

My confidence with him has actually been ... kind of low here? Low enough that I've wondered if I'm disappointing people by sticking around. This is just. The nicest thing ever I can't even. ;____;

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'll do my very best to keep it up!!

[identity profile] thom-293.livejournal.com 2011-03-21 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
HEY A KEYSMASH IS FINE TOO...

But no, hey, you're awesome. I know what it's like to sometimes feel a little down on a muse, but there is definitely no disappointment here. \o/ Just keep on keeping on, you're doing great. <3333
notjelly: (a cat is fine too)

[personal profile] notjelly 2011-03-19 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE WHAT I'VE SEEN OF HIM SO FAR
poisonousflame: +sora (idk my bff's other?)

[personal profile] poisonousflame 2011-03-20 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
8D I'M GLAD TO HEAR THAT!