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singularityooc2011-03-18 08:42 pm
MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING
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Notes:
- Activity is an issue that I'm veeery much aware of, and am trying to improve.
- Character-wise, he's starting to develop a bit differently than I thought he would. :|a ANY CRIT WOULD BE AWESOME.
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/grabby hands at D:
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/run--
/towards--!
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I'm gonna just come out and say this.
I am not a big Roxas fan. But your Axel? Has made me seriously consider picking him up because you just. HNRGH BABY. I can hear his voice in everything you do with him, and you manage to have this... little undercurrent of Nobody!Sadness floating around him that just makes me want to put him in a frilly pink basket and feed him SEA SALT ICE CREAM. Your diction is spot on and you catch a lot of facets to him that I think most people ignore or overlook in favour of OMG WOOBIES!!! I like that you haven't forgotten he's ruthless, that he's deceptive, that he can be a total jerkass and still come out of it being a pretty good friend. Your writing and diction both suit him perfectly as well, it's nice to see such a solid gestalt.
Basically: you play him the way I've always wanted to see him played. And that makes you badass. \o/
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And then I couldn't think of what to say beyond lajsdfoihaosijnawenjndavnnajdfoiasjfjasldfnasdf
AND I'M STILL PRETTY INCOHERENT because that is. ajsdlfjalsdjfasdf THANK YOU SO MUCH AHHHHHHHHHHHH
My confidence with him has actually been ... kind of low here? Low enough that I've wondered if I'm disappointing people by sticking around. This is just. The nicest thing ever I can't even. ;____;
THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'll do my very best to keep it up!!
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But no, hey, you're awesome. I know what it's like to sometimes feel a little down on a muse, but there is definitely no disappointment here. \o/ Just keep on keeping on, you're doing great. <3333
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