Primarily, just a few things that kind of stand out to me right now. :|a
First and foremost, I do think planning out a bit better via RP would be helpful. I understand doing things on the fly; it's freakin' RP, we can only plan so much. But for awhile, you didn't seem to know if Motoko's actions during the SHODAN event were entirely her. Granted, right now, I do like that it IS questionable, and that question hangs in the air for suspense. It works right now. But I know after Thane's operation, you were kind of going back and forth with that aspect and it sort of concerned me.
Another matter with Motoko is that I understand that she's kind of a douche; it's part of her character. But right now, I almost think she's being downright cruel with Thane in his most recent post. I don't know if she remembers what happened -- she seemed to imply she did -- but it did kind of surprise me. I don't know, you know the character better than I do and it HAS been awhile since I watched the show I'll admit. It just stuck out to me.
I do appreciate the character development, though, and it's been a fantastic opportunity. I'm definitely NOT saying you're a crappy RPer or anything of the like. I want you to understand that. I'm just pointing out two things that concerned me at this time, and I want to be helpful and point them out to you is all.
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First and foremost, I do think planning out a bit better via RP would be helpful. I understand doing things on the fly; it's freakin' RP, we can only plan so much. But for awhile, you didn't seem to know if Motoko's actions during the SHODAN event were entirely her. Granted, right now, I do like that it IS questionable, and that question hangs in the air for suspense. It works right now. But I know after Thane's operation, you were kind of going back and forth with that aspect and it sort of concerned me.
Another matter with Motoko is that I understand that she's kind of a douche; it's part of her character. But right now, I almost think she's being downright cruel with Thane in his most recent post. I don't know if she remembers what happened -- she seemed to imply she did -- but it did kind of surprise me. I don't know, you know the character better than I do and it HAS been awhile since I watched the show I'll admit. It just stuck out to me.
I do appreciate the character development, though, and it's been a fantastic opportunity. I'm definitely NOT saying you're a crappy RPer or anything of the like. I want you to understand that. I'm just pointing out two things that concerned me at this time, and I want to be helpful and point them out to you is all.