HOW'S MY DRIVING

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HOW'S MY DRIVING

Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

What is the HMD? The HMD is an optional meme in which players can receive concrit and feedback on how they handle their characters. Please remember to be constructive in your feedback; flaming will not be tolerated on this meme.

Please note that while receiving positive feedback is also nice, it's much nicer to know exactly why someone might think they're doing a good job. Try to be specific as possible, although there's no rule saying you have to.

Anon commenting is on for this HMD, although if this is a privilege and not a right, and may be taken away if abused. If you wish to participate, just comment with your character name, journal, and if applicable, any notes about your character you want to add. If you'd like, you can also link to your own personal HMDs.

Comments

aave

[featheryasshole]

Davesprite | featheryasshole

Personal HMD is here.

Re: aave

[theuserabides]

I like how you manage to get Dave's vulnerability (he's 13 and trying to save the universe FFS) out there without compromising his coolkid facade. It's a delicate balance, and you strike it well.

ETA: Also meant to say that he's Doomed Timeline Dave Now with Extra Feathery Asshole and Sprite, which makes the insecurity more marked, and consequently his efforts to conceal it. That comes through, too.

Wow it sure would be great if I could hold a thought in my head longer than 45 seconds.