I know my activity's been pretty spotty, and sometimes I wonder if I've got enough free time to really make Jamison a viable character. I'm having trouble nailing down her voice, so if anyone has suggestions for that or just criticism in general, I'm all ears.
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I know my activity's been pretty spotty, and sometimes I wonder if I've got enough free time to really make Jamison a viable character. I'm having trouble nailing down her voice, so if anyone has suggestions for that or just criticism in general, I'm all ears.