http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc2011-03-18 08:42 pm
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MARCH HOW'S MY DRIVING

HOW'S MY DRIVING


Welcome to Singularity's community How's My Driving!

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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
That's not very patient, you know. Regardless, here.

[identity profile] selfkismesis.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I totally adored my thread with Riza, and I've loved stalking all her other threads. Can't wait for more! <3

[identity profile] selfkismesis.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
come back to me kiteeeeeeeee
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:08 pm (UTC)(link)
AND ADORABLE ROLEPLAY. YES EXACTLY YOU UNDERSTAND ME PURRFECTLY.

Lol well if she had her way she'd be sticking her sniffnode in all the things. WHAT'S GOING ON HERE LET ME SEE CAN I PLAY WITH IT OR SHIP IT? ...there was a Mountain Dew robot? /priorities

[identity profile] selfkismesis.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know anything about the canon, but I've totally loved my threads with Vaultieeee so far. SORRY KARKAT'S SUCH A JERK AND HATES HIS PAST-FUTURE SELF SO MUCH.
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
They come in Act 5, ahaha it's a long wait. But thank you so much, I really wasn't expecting so many people to respond and it was just. God, so beautiful. FINALLY, A USE FOR MY ART LEVEL. ;A;

God yes, the tea party. You'll see how a person can get militant over friendship and scones. She will meet them all.

[identity profile] selfkismesis.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)






it has brought a single tear to my eye
a rainbow tear
i am crying rainbows for you, my love
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU LOOK LIKE A MAN WHO ENJOYS ASTERISK PRETEND, GLASSES HUMAN.

By which I mean oh hell yes.
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Fffftfrejhfjr more like cast is best cast. I just blend in with the awesome.
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
NO NOT REALLY ALTHOUGH IT STILL MAKES ME CAPSLOCK AND KEYSMASH

AND IT'S NOT EVEN DONE. IN THE FAR FUTURE THERE WILL BE REVENGE OF THE SHIPPING WALL. Probably when one of her ships get sunk.

Also armor dudes are getting a paper copy of the picture of their polygamous pale relationship for the fridge. She's thoughtful like that.
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I will hold you gently, and sing sparkly lullabies to keep you warm and full of the magic of friendship.
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[personal profile] shipper 2011-03-19 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
MOMMYYYYYYYYYYYYY I still can't believe you apped her and you're so good and hrjktekh MAMA. ;A;

Also I want to see moar Eridan.

[identity profile] selfkismesis.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohmigosh, I totally adore your Davesprite forever and ever. Like it was mentioned above-- you're able to pull off those changes in timeline and personality that separate Davesprite from Dave. He's been through a lot more, and you can really see that.

Also, the whole Davesprite being separate from Dave-thing. Ahhh, breaks my heart. Especially seeing it all during the SHODON plot. I loved stalking all the logs for that, espec the ones with Davesprite.

Basically: you are amazing. Keep up the good work forever and ever.

[identity profile] selfkismesis.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
i don't even know how to be coherent with this sobbinglyism

however, i will do my best--

A little while ago, Dave-mun linked me a hilarious thread in which Dave and Vriska had a sloppy alien makeout session filled with insults and hatred. I read it and was like, "Ohmigosh, this is so amazing. I wish I could play in this game." And he said those fateful words: "We don't have a Karkat."

And I was like, "I want to try playing Karkat in a game. And this game looks absolutely amazing. Oh my god, don't tempt me."

There was temptation.

I didn't stand a chance.

There is no regret.

So you are part of the reason I am here. Hurrahhh.

Into characterization itself: Your Vriska is amazing. One of the things I love about Homestuck RP is that it gives the players extreme freedom to be as hilarious and creative as they can possibly be. A few people drop the ball-- Most other canons are pretty strict and don't allow for that sort of freedom, so it's understandable. But you've got that creativity down perfectly. Vriska, like in the canon, forcibly grabs the spotlight and hogs the fuck out of it. While we miss a lot of that due to Homestuck's format (like not getting to see much from the troll session), you expand on it here in the most awesome manner imaginable. It makes Vriska more dynamic-- we see when she's sad or scared or confident and cocky, and we see a lot more of it.

There are so many times when I'm just staring at a tag from you like, "HOW DO I COMPETE WITH THIS AWESOME. OH MY GOD KEYBOARD SMASH AS MUCH BULLSHIT AS POSSIBLE AND MAYBE IT WILL BE COHERENT."

Ahhhh, you are just awesome. Sorry for the tl;dr

Re: BROUGHT TO YOU BY: SID

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I'mma be useless and agree with what else has been said here. I read through your background on him when I first saw you on D_M and I was stunned. I, personally, love taking characters with little canon background and fleshing them out [/stares at Bro] and I think all the choices you've made so far make perfect sense. You clearly know the canon well, and you've taken what you know of the canon and extrapolated from that to go "okay, so, if a person grew up in this sort of situation, how would they behave?" Thus, everything about Ed makes perfect sense to me, I love watching him work, and you have no idea how jazzed I was that you actually apped in.

TL;DR - U DO GUD

and yeah if he's not like this in Tron 3 I will cry :( And then tell you to keep yours around as an AU or something.

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
i am just going to say that it is your fault i am in this fandom you jerk :|

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh good :D if she is scaring the hell out of people then I am doin it rite. One of the harder things to do with villains in general is to keep 'em terrifying, and in the past I've failed in that regard. So it's good to hear that she's stayed creepertastic.

Then I'm glad! :D I've also been pleased to see John running around in that plot, and I hope that via slow backtags I can see him and Sarah smash the shit out of things (and even if backtags don't happen, the mental image is lovely)

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
ATLAS NEEDS TO TALK TO SHODAN ONCE SHE'S DONE BEING DEAD OKAY!?

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[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:01 pm (UTC)(link)
>8|


jk <3

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I ADMIT I AM SO HAPPY THAT ALL WORKED OUT. I owe the mods so much for being so chill and so willing to compromise. Just. So amazing.

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
app cut man

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
It's more that towards the end I stopped tagging as much and a few people (Mon, particularly) wanted in and I just could not make it work. I lost track of a lot of shit and the finale was not nearly as well organized or awesome as I would have liked, and I felt like it got VERY homestuck-centric when I would have rather had moar space marines

(not that I don't love you guys but. yeah)

[identity profile] alphaclass.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
ANON.

Okay, your Anon is adorable and really great and. I admit, I wasn't sure about the whole speaking thing at first, but you converted me to the ways of modem-sounded AdoraAnon within minutes of conversing with him -- and your reasoning for it makes perfect sense too! It's definitely makes sense in a game, as well, since [insert what Kuruma said here].

From what we see in the game, I'd say you have got his personality down pat. Just. GAH. I really do love him, I do I do, and I love bouncing off of him. His and Ed's interactions make me grin all the damn time.

AS FOR ROOKIE I am. So unfamiliar with his canon. But from what I've seen, both Rookie and Anon seem to have two distinct voices!

/stalks the walkthrough links

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I think what I love the best is how well you tag outside the HS cast. the threads Nepeta has with our various space marines and computer programs are adorable and cute and work so well. She is like the little canon ambassador or something.

Re: MOUSE

[identity profile] teal-deer.livejournal.com 2011-03-19 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
BRO. VIRGIL. LASERTAG/PAINTBALL YES.

also Bro has a project later he'll need engineer help on - so tell me. Is Virgil interested in building voice activated robots for the use in epic rap battles?

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