Thank you for applying to singularityrpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following:
A rewritten setting section, giving more information on the world of Portal and the science within it, but not be quite so focused on telling the intimate story of what happened to GLaDOS. Setting is to tell about the world; it should not act as a history section for the character.
An adjustment to limitations to keep the systems she can access on Sacrosanct to only one zone.
Please provide an additional third person log sample themed to Singularity, showing more reaction to their new environment and more of GLaDOS' personality as outlined in the application.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.
REVISIONS
A rewritten setting section, giving more information on the world of Portal and the science within it, but not be quite so focused on telling the intimate story of what happened to GLaDOS. Setting is to tell about the world; it should not act as a history section for the character.
An adjustment to limitations to keep the systems she can access on Sacrosanct to only one zone.
Please provide an additional third person log sample themed to Singularity, showing more reaction to their new environment and more of GLaDOS' personality as outlined in the application.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.