Thank you for applying to singularityrpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.
Expand the setting to address the variety of alien races and their impact in the Star Wars universe; as well, please provide further details on the technology differences, in particular the lightsaber as it is a staple of the Jedi and Sith.
Further limitations are needed on his power, as a fully realised Sith possesses a significant advantage against others and can pose a threat to the station integrity with their telekinesis alone.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.
REVISIONS
Expand the setting to address the variety of alien races and their impact in the Star Wars universe; as well, please provide further details on the technology differences, in particular the lightsaber as it is a staple of the Jedi and Sith.
Further limitations are needed on his power, as a fully realised Sith possesses a significant advantage against others and can pose a threat to the station integrity with their telekinesis alone.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.