Thank you for applying to singularityrpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.
Please give us more on what the canon world is like. What's Puyo and how does it tie in to the universe? What do we know about the society of the game world? What's Arle's role and goal in her setting?
An expanded personality section. Game protagonists often require the applicant to extrapolate somewhat from the evidence in canon. We need much more about Arle; how she behaves, how she relates to other people--friends, enemies, new acquaintances. She's the protagonist, but what's her motivation for it? Does she want fame? Money? Is she doing it out of the goodness of her heart? Are there any other character trait that stand out? What does the bond with Carbuncle mean do her?
On a related note, please provide more detail on Carbuncle. Is he being apped as a pet, or under the related characters rule?
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.
Note: Thank you for pointing out the dead links. Several of those characters have dropped since the move to DW, and we need to contact players about new sample applications.
REVISIONS
Please give us more on what the canon world is like. What's Puyo and how does it tie in to the universe? What do we know about the society of the game world? What's Arle's role and goal in her setting?
An expanded personality section. Game protagonists often require the applicant to extrapolate somewhat from the evidence in canon. We need much more about Arle; how she behaves, how she relates to other people--friends, enemies, new acquaintances. She's the protagonist, but what's her motivation for it? Does she want fame? Money? Is she doing it out of the goodness of her heart? Are there any other character trait that stand out? What does the bond with Carbuncle mean do her?
On a related note, please provide more detail on Carbuncle. Is he being apped as a pet, or under the related characters rule?
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.
Note: Thank you for pointing out the dead links. Several of those characters have dropped since the move to DW, and we need to contact players about new sample applications.