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Singularity App Team ([personal profile] singdemimods) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc 2012-01-28 01:40 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

Thank you for applying to [community profile] singularityrpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.

Revise your AU Justifications section to include more about how the events in canon have changed. As it is now, it gives us plenty of detail on how the AU changed Charles, but not enough on how the world is different due to the changes made.

Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.

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