Thank you for applying to singularity_rpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.
Expand more on the Setting your character comes from. Organizations like the SSI should be explained, as should the importance of priests, effects of The Curse, and a more detailed explanation of the magical creatures on this version of Earth and their purpose. Please remember that while a history section can be written up and linked in the references section, the Setting is not the place to summarize your canon.
Please revise your third person. As it is now, it doesn’t allow enough insight into the character.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.
Revisions
Expand more on the Setting your character comes from. Organizations like the SSI should be explained, as should the importance of priests, effects of The Curse, and a more detailed explanation of the magical creatures on this version of Earth and their purpose. Please remember that while a history section can be written up and linked in the references section, the Setting is not the place to summarize your canon.
Please revise your third person. As it is now, it doesn’t allow enough insight into the character.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.