Thank you for applying to singularity_rpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.
We would like to see revisions in your setting section to include more information on the Signless, the role the Ancestors played in altering the first SGRUB session of the trolls, and the difference between modern Alternia and ancient Alternia. In addition, please mention how Alternia was changed due to the bargain made in the Ancestors' Scratched session, and the role Doc Scratch played in it.
Please revise your abilities section to include the durability trolls show as a race in canon (ie: Mindfang surviving the loss of her arm as well as a fight without it).
Note: Due to the importance that text-based quirks have in canon when it comes to the characters, we would like an explanation for Redglare’s apparent lack of one.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.
REVISIONS + NOTE
We would like to see revisions in your setting section to include more information on the Signless, the role the Ancestors played in altering the first SGRUB session of the trolls, and the difference between modern Alternia and ancient Alternia. In addition, please mention how Alternia was changed due to the bargain made in the Ancestors' Scratched session, and the role Doc Scratch played in it.
Please revise your abilities section to include the durability trolls show as a race in canon (ie: Mindfang surviving the loss of her arm as well as a fight without it).
Note: Due to the importance that text-based quirks have in canon when it comes to the characters, we would like an explanation for Redglare’s apparent lack of one.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.