http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc 2011-11-03 07:51 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

Thank you for applying to [livejournal.com profile] singularity_rpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.

While the writing quality is solid, we would like to see an expanded or revised third person sample that gives us greater insight into Captain America’s thoughts and more reflection on his personality.

Additionally, in the future we would appreciate if applicants stuck to the current application format for ease of navigation.

Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance.

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