http://singularitymods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singularitymods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] singularityooc 2010-10-23 05:43 pm (UTC)

REVISION

Apologies for the length of time your application has been waiting.

Thank you for applying to [livejournal.com profile] singularity_rpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.

{{Areas:
-More information in setting and personality. Setting should include greater detail of the canon's environment and plot line. Keep in mind this app should serve as an introduction to the character and canon for readers who have no canon familiarity whatsoever. Personality should be fleshed out to include greater depth in personality aspects and more aspects in general.
-A revised log sample showing more characterization and reaction to their new environment.


Please reply with the needed information as soon as possible! Thank you in advance.

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