Thank you for applying to singularity_rpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.
We would like more information regarding Church’s personality in relation to him being the Alpha, as being the remnants of a tortured A.I. is something that should be mentioned due to it’s importance at the point in the series you are taking him from. In addition, please provide some examples in order to explain certain aspects of his personality, as well back up claims of him being one of the smartest soldiers in the canyon and his ability to rally the Blues; as the entire point of the Alpha being placed in Blood Gulch was to put him with individuals as unable to function as he was in order to keep him hidden.
Revisions to the Abilities section; the claim that Church is capable with firearms is dubious at best, since he has missed targets at point-blank and long range during most of his time on screen. Regarding his ability to posses people, there is strong evidence that A.I. can only inhabit those who have the right neural implants, so while he would be able to take over the bodies of a simulation soldier or a Freelancer, it is unlikely that he could “posses” a normal human being.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance
REVISIONS
We would like more information regarding Church’s personality in relation to him being the Alpha, as being the remnants of a tortured A.I. is something that should be mentioned due to it’s importance at the point in the series you are taking him from. In addition, please provide some examples in order to explain certain aspects of his personality, as well back up claims of him being one of the smartest soldiers in the canyon and his ability to rally the Blues; as the entire point of the Alpha being placed in Blood Gulch was to put him with individuals as unable to function as he was in order to keep him hidden.
Revisions to the Abilities section; the claim that Church is capable with firearms is dubious at best, since he has missed targets at point-blank and long range during most of his time on screen. Regarding his ability to posses people, there is strong evidence that A.I. can only inhabit those who have the right neural implants, so while he would be able to take over the bodies of a simulation soldier or a Freelancer, it is unlikely that he could “posses” a normal human being.
Please reply with the needed information within 72 hours! Thank you in advance