Thank you for applying to singularity_rpg. We regret to say your application has been rejected.
The application provides insufficient depth in the personality section. While Singularity does allow characters with brief appearances and underdeveloped personalities in canon to be applied for, we require that these characters be thoroughly fleshed-out in the application. This has not been done.
The third person sample does not read like an example of an RP post, that is, focusing on internal monologue and characterization. Additionally, it contains inaccuracies with respect to canon events, given the information currently available. There is no indication that Darkleer was put on trial, nor that Mindfang broke him out. Cross-caste romance is not criminal in troll society.
The network sample does not reflect the description of personality provided. Since Redglare has never spoken in canon, her voice is entirely speculative, but the sample should match the tone given in the personality section and fit as well as possible into canon. The tone is too modern and informal, and Redglare comes across as far too conciliatory for a Legislacerator pursuing justice.
Finally, in light of the ongoing developments in canon concerning the Ancestors, it is very likely that further information about Redglare will be revealed, such as her relationship with the Sufferer and her activities before her capture of Mindfang and the resulting trial. This may render some or all extrapolations about Redglare's personality and motives incorrect, and thus we feel that any application for Redglare should be postponed until the current story arc concludes.
We are afraid we cannot accept this application. You are welcome to reapply in a future app round, once canon information about the character is more extensive and settled.
REJECTED
The application provides insufficient depth in the personality section. While Singularity does allow characters with brief appearances and underdeveloped personalities in canon to be applied for, we require that these characters be thoroughly fleshed-out in the application. This has not been done.
The third person sample does not read like an example of an RP post, that is, focusing on internal monologue and characterization. Additionally, it contains inaccuracies with respect to canon events, given the information currently available. There is no indication that Darkleer was put on trial, nor that Mindfang broke him out. Cross-caste romance is not criminal in troll society.
The network sample does not reflect the description of personality provided. Since Redglare has never spoken in canon, her voice is entirely speculative, but the sample should match the tone given in the personality section and fit as well as possible into canon. The tone is too modern and informal, and Redglare comes across as far too conciliatory for a Legislacerator pursuing justice.
Finally, in light of the ongoing developments in canon concerning the Ancestors, it is very likely that further information about Redglare will be revealed, such as her relationship with the Sufferer and her activities before her capture of Mindfang and the resulting trial. This may render some or all extrapolations about Redglare's personality and motives incorrect, and thus we feel that any application for Redglare should be postponed until the current story arc concludes.
We are afraid we cannot accept this application. You are welcome to reapply in a future app round, once canon information about the character is more extensive and settled.