Thank you for applying to singularity_rpg. Before we vote on your application, we would like to see revisions for the following.
More details in regards to setting. Those that are not canon-familiar should be able to read this and understand how dire the situation was in regards to the violence, as well as the character’s impact on their universe.
A revised log sample that better illustrates the character’s reaction to his arrival in the junkyard. Keep in mind, he will be given a tutorial via holograms and doused in a chemical shower upon exiting the junkyard.
Please reply with the needed information as soon as possible! Thank you in advance.
REVISIONS
More details in regards to setting. Those that are not canon-familiar should be able to read this and understand how dire the situation was in regards to the violence, as well as the character’s impact on their universe.
A revised log sample that better illustrates the character’s reaction to his arrival in the junkyard. Keep in mind, he will be given a tutorial via holograms and doused in a chemical shower upon exiting the junkyard.
Please reply with the needed information as soon as possible! Thank you in advance.