Thank you for your interest in Singularity! Overall we liked the application, but we would like to see revisions in the following key areas.
-Setting
As we've addressed before with other Mass Effect applications, the Setting section of the application should cover in appropriate detail the physical, technological, racial and political context in which your character exists. This should be enough information that someone with no canon familiarity can grasp what your character's world is like. Please expand the current section to cover more of this information.
You can reply to this comment with your revisions (or comment noting the app link has been revised) after which we'll evaluate the entire application. Thank you for your patience!
REVISIONS REQUESTED
-Setting
As we've addressed before with other Mass Effect applications, the Setting section of the application should cover in appropriate detail the physical, technological, racial and political context in which your character exists. This should be enough information that someone with no canon familiarity can grasp what your character's world is like. Please expand the current section to cover more of this information.
You can reply to this comment with your revisions (or comment noting the app link has been revised) after which we'll evaluate the entire application. Thank you for your patience!